American Comics: I Play a Fortune Teller from the Start, and I Tell the Avengers

Overall, it's not bad, but he loves telling riddles too much. He basically uses riddles in everything he says, just like in the original story. No one who can tell fortunes is as charlatan as him. And isn't he a time traveler? Why does the Hulk need to tell fortunes too? Relying too much on fortune-telling isn't good.

As far as the story is going, it's written quite well overall, and there are no problems with the character portrayals. It manages to convey a sense of mystery, and as a fanfiction about the mysterious, it doesn't have any major flaws. Personally, I feel there are two areas that need improvement. First, the overall pacing is a bit too fast.

Keep it up! It's rare to have both an American comic and Lord of Mysteries, so please don't let it stop airing!

It's alright, no major problems so far. The plot is a bit rushed, but it doesn't affect the overall viewing experience. This might be because there are few side stories as the main storyline progresses; the main storyline is quite well-developed. Although there are a lot of plot holes left to be filled, the logic is currently fairly consistent. Just be careful not to forget to fill in those holes later on.

Suddenly I feel like the protagonist is walking through the Marvel Universe as a fortune teller. He could also write about Lord of Mysteries in his spare time. Given Westerners' love for Lord of Mysteries, I think they'd have a brain-boosting experience. 😏 Is this a sign that they're not going to write anymore? I was planning to let it rest for a while before checking, but judging from this, I hope I don't kill it. •ᴗ•💧

It's good, I like it, but there's too little content. Also, I have a few questions: Is the protagonist's divination ability pre-emptive? How can an ordinary person have divination abilities? Can the protagonist become the Lord of Mysteries again? After all, the current Lord of Mysteries is Klein. Also, will the protagonist give potions to other people?

Author, have you forgotten the rules for playing the role of a fortune teller? 🤔

I would give it five stars. The pacing is a little slow but still good. Every character is unique, and you can watch it from an observer's perspective. The foreshadowing is well done, and there are unexpected surprises. I really like this book.

That's a conservative estimate for now. By the way, will the main character die and change identities? Simp...

It's good, but Klein never imagined that advancing to Sequence Nine would be so difficult 🤦, but it's definitely a pretty good Marvel and Mystery fanfiction.