American Comics: I Play a Fortune Teller from the Start, and I Tell the Avengers

Overall it's pretty good, but I really like telling riddles. Basically, everything must be riddled, original work. Anyone who can do divination has no magic stick like you. And isn't he a time traveler? Why does the Hulk have to do divination? It's not okay to rely too much on divination.

As far as the current plot is concerned, the overall writing is okay, and there are no problems with the portrayal of the characters. It can show the sense of mystery, and as a mysterious fan, there are no outstanding points. For myself, there are two areas where it currently feels a bit lacking. One is that the overall pace is too fast. Although I can understand the new author publishing a book, I still hope that the pace can be slowed down to enrich the mystery of the plot and the protagonist, add appropriate transitions, and depict more daily life. The second point is that if possible, I recommend adding more scenes to create an atmosphere, rather than using simple characters to advance. Most Cthulhu-themed books like to depict mystery. As a fanfic itself, especially if it is written by a new author, in terms of writing style, there is not much fault. If you stick to it and the setting does not collapse, this should be good. The above is my own opinion. Because this is a mysterious fanfic and has some high requirements, it is definitely my own opinion.

Come on, it's rare to find a beautiful comic and Lord of Mysteries, so don't give up.

It's okay, there's no big problem at the moment. The plot arrangement is a bit tight, but it does not affect the look and feel. This may be because there are few branch plots as the main plot progresses. The main plot is well crafted. Although a lot of holes have been dug (drawn) and have not yet been filled, logically a certain degree of self-consistency can be achieved. Just be careful not to forget to fill in the holes later.

Suddenly I feel that the protagonist is walking in the Marvel universe as a fortune teller. He can also write about the Lord of Mysteries in his spare time. With Westerners' love for the Lord of Mysteries, I think they can have an orgasm directly in their skulls [laughter] Is this not written anymore? I originally planned to keep it for a while and then look at it. Seeing this situation, I won't keep it to death.•ᴗ•💧

It looks good, I like it, but there are too few. I also have a few questions to ask, is the protagonist's divination ability prepaid? Why do ordinary people still have the ability to divine? Can the protagonist still become the Lord of Mysteries? After all, the current master of mystery is Klein, and will the protagonist give other people potions? To be honest, I finished reading Lord of Mysteries but I didn't get enough of it. Their thieves with different abilities are fun. I hope the author can write more. Updates are so slow. I finished reading them in a few days after watching them for more than ten days. Please give me more!

Author, have you forgotten the rules for playing a fortune teller? [Thinking]

I can give it five stars. The pace is a little slow but still acceptable. Each character is very special and can be seen from the perspective of a bystander. The foreshadowing is also very good, and there will be unexpected rewards. I like this book very much.

I'm being conservative at the moment. Will the protagonist die and change his vest? Licking the dog. . . .

It's good to read, but Klein never thought that it would be so difficult to advance to Sequence Nine [facepalm], but it is actually a good Marvel and mysterious fan novel.