Spirit of the Heart Abyss

This book is more in line with my imagination of the follow-up to Lord of Mysteries than Ring of Fate. This is not to say that this book is better written than Ring of Fate, but that it has increased Klein's influence compared to Ring of Fate. If we just talk about hard power issues such as writing power and plot conception, Ring of Fate is definitely stronger, which is incomparable. But if it is just a fan novel, then there is basically nothing to criticize about this book. The writing ideas are clear, and the setting of the original path is not out of control, and it is not as interesting as other fan works. A bunch of messy logical loopholes, this is the key. All the private settings in this book make sense logically and follow the original work of Mystery. It does not take away from the original settings, which also makes the plot more reasonable. The frequent appearances of the Tarot Society and Klein really made me feel the changes that Mr. Fool has brought to the world. Can It makes the readers of the original work feel novel while not abandoning the original story line. This is a very powerful thing. The author's story line is not procrastinated. The writing style has a strong sense of mystery. It can be seen that the author is very careful and does not just get too excited and give up on everything like some authors do. The author said that there will be Rose in the future. There will probably be a meeting with fellow readers for your role. I look forward to that part of the story, and hope to see several fellows get together and have a good chat. As long as the book maintains this style and doesn't let itself go, the quality will not fall apart. The author can also read more reviews if he encounters problems with the plot and setting, that's all. In summary, the writing style is immature, but not trivial, the plot structure is complete, the ideas are clear, the private setting is interesting, and it is a rare and mysterious fan.

The writing is actually quite good, with good logic and storytelling. It's a pity that the characters did not "come alive". There is no human feeling at all. The Mushroom King is brilliant in the original work because of its written expression. Come on

But I have a question. This timeline should be after the Circle of Fate. But in the end, Lord of Mysteries, Klein released the modern people from the cocoons. How do you round this? But the writing is okay. Support 😘

It's okay. The author said it's the first time he's written a novel, and it's pretty good to have it written like this. It can be seen that a lot of homework has been done. It's just that the plot setting is still a bit monotonous. But as a first-time novelist, it's already pretty good. Volume 2 and Volume 1 are much better, let's keep up the good work!

What a resurrected great existence, what I am your adventure, and showing a movie to make a pie. Isn't this the routine operation of evil gods and parasites? It also deceives the protagonist, a human-machine novice without extraordinary common sense. Even Leonard will be wary of it.

A few of the secret books are okay

The private design is interesting and logical. The author is really attentive. It must be five stars!

The characters' IQs are online and the plots are interlocking. I haven't seen such a comfortable fanfic in a long time.

The characters are very three-dimensional and have a strong sense of immersion. I have already recommended it to my friends!

The setting of The Only Way is so touching. I look forward to the subsequent interaction with the Tarot Society!