To Torment the Righteous, I Had No Choice but to Make a Game

Overall, it's fine, but you should use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, you know what I mean. The subject matter you wrote in this game is novel and the content is substantial, so why insist on writing those old-fashioned slap-in-the-face plots? I think the content outside the game should be a protagonist who makes people love and hate. Rather than pretending to be a slap in the face, the old plot will be more attractive. Simply play the game. There are many things that can be extended by playing the game. The pace is not so fast and there are actually more things that can be written in detail. I believe that interspersing warm daily life between the games will be more interesting than the brainless villain (personal opinion, for reference [understood])

The game is a cliché, but it's the first time I've seen someone incorporate the worldview of cultivating immortals. Brilliant idea Disadvantages: The protagonist's show-off and slap-in-the-face plot is very vulgar. But the most important part of the game is pretty good. Considering the overall impression and future prospects, 5 stars are given

I think it looks great, especially the game content. But there are also shortcomings. The first one is the senior sister. Due to my dislike of goddess harem stories, I feel disgusted when the author writes female characters. Currently, the senior sister has developed a competitive spirit and curiosity about the protagonist. This is tentative. I hope she doesn't fall in love with the protagonist. After all, I can't fall in love with the game producer just because I love playing games. The second one is quite repetitive. I wonder if there will be a slap-in-the-face plot later on. In the beginning, the elder made a bet, and then the disciple Dabi made a bet with the elder. Of course, the two are good friends and have similar personalities. But if the plot is repeated once or twice, it won't feel very good. After all, there are only a few updates in total, and the dialogue will take up a lot of words, which is quite boring. After all, the mainstream is to watch disciples suffer, and the protagonist slaps in the face and pretends to be serious. Why don't I just go read a novel like Dou Po [face covering] [face covering]

Following up. Currently five stars. The male protagonist is not a loser, and he has never seen a woman unable to walk. It's purely funny without punching, and can be read by both men and women. The writing style is above average and the ideas are very good. It is considered a good book by Tomato. I hope it won't be unfinished. Later, when I saw the game around 260, I felt very uninvolved. The people chatting no longer seemed to be ancient immortal cultivators, but smelled like modern hanging silk. I retract my original evaluation. Not recommended now.

I think it was fun to write. If you copy pvz, you will get five stars. After reading the author's previous book, it was very conventional. This book is quite new. Don't copy those conventional games. Just copy small games like Temple Run PVZ and I Wanna, which are very good. I like them both. The author should write more and try to update it four times a day. It's good and I love reading it. By the way, don't make too many pretentious plots, it's a bit too embarrassing. It's good to just make games w, but it would be better if it is without cp, don't write about female pairings and male protagonists having emotional lines, and the author has worked hard to make screenshots of i wanna. Don't be tired, but don't rest either... It's not easy to find a good game production seedling, don't be fooled! ! !

The game design is very good, but there are often ridicules and slaps in the face. It would be better if there were less of these. The plot is still very good and worth watching.

5 Stars, the familiar game and the world of cultivating immortals are well integrated, at least the integration is not abrupt. It continues the slap in the face of the previous work, I like it. I hope that the game and immortality can be better integrated in the future, and I look forward to it.

I think it's well written. It's funny and humorous, but the premise is that you have to abandon your brain. If you discuss the issue too seriously, you won't be able to read any novels.

When are you going to write a game? This pet-catching game is too long. The mini-game part written by the author feels more interesting [crying]. And because the setting requires breaking defenses or the death of a monk to accumulate magic points, it feels like it limits the subject matter. The protagonist is doing the game to cultivate something, not just for fun. It feels a bit like watching the protagonist work just because it is fun. I hope the system can reward the protagonist in this regard so that the protagonist can let go. The author's writing is actually very interesting, and there are no strange emotional lines. I think it's okay with the senior sister. It would also be good if they end up together. At the moment, it seems a bit ambiguous. Zhong Yi feels that there are actually many scenes that hide the male lead and it's very funny. The main character settings are very vivid and interesting. It would be nice to improve the fantasy settings. I might as well create a network. Only the forum feels so retro.

It's okay, the subject matter is quite new, the main character is a demon, and he makes a game to make the righteous path go to waste and practice (although I don't know why I actually played it, and everyone broke through, and the protagonist is not like a demon, the righteous path is more demonic than the demonic path)