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Yes, it has always attracted me since I started reading the updates. Except for some logic that does not make sense and needs to be put down, the overall content is very good and deserves a higher score. I hope the author will be more rigorous about the specific details. Of course it is a cool article. It is almost enough. I look forward to more games, Fantasy Westward Journey, World of Warcraft, cf,

The biggest advantage of the latest 74 chapters is that it is fun. The characters are dry and the plot is old-fashioned and the villains bounce back and forth. But it is fun. The feeling of modern game concepts crushing contemporary hicks is well written. Four stars for encouragement first. ☕

I feel that the writing in the front is quite enjoyable, but some parts are too long (such as Audition) In the later period (currently Chapter 211), I feel like the author got too excited after writing it (how do you shoot faces in the game?), And you told me that a group of people can do special effects without lag, but two people can do special effects with lag, what the hell? Apart from these personal feelings, I still feel very good, and I hope there won't be any big poisonous points when it is finished (after all, they are all free novels) Also, I hope that one game will not directly occupy the pure content of many chapters. The above contents are all personal opinions (don't criticize me)

I really recommend it. The low score is just an illusion. Especially after more than a hundred chapters, the writing is very exciting. The image of a "game god" slowly emerges. Some of the descriptions are really inexplicably cool.

So far it looks okay, but I feel like the journey jumps directly to League of Legends too quickly, and the background board for the Age of Legends jumps too quickly.

It's okay, the description is very good, just like writing an essay. But reduce repetitive plots, such as the section of the League of Legends music video. Just one comment takes 4 chapters, and more than 8,000 words are too many. Refer to similar books, they usually don't comment too much on one thing, 700.800 Words is about right, and a maximum of 2,000 words for one chapter is the limit. Furthermore, the plot is exaggerated, it is difficult to get into the drama, it is not exciting to watch and some plots are not sufficiently foreshadowed. This is the main reason for the low score. Overall, the first 100 chapters are very good and very enjoyable. If you can change the later chapters, it will definitely be rated 8 or even 8.5 Or above.

Love it, love it. More to come! There are a few minor pitfalls in the early stage, but it is undeniable that this article is very enjoyable. It is very exciting and can arouse your emotions. Almost every chapter will make you feel happy and want to laugh! Not to mention, more updates, more updates to the point of death!

Nice! The protagonist is powerful and invincible. His character is objective and rational. He is similar to a supreme god. He is a dimension-reducing blow to everyone. I love him~

That's it. The author quickly upgraded the nuclear-powered liver. It's not enough.

The author can write a novel about the advent of Zhengtu online games into reality. The National War makes me excited. I can add some talent elements. In addition, why didn't I see the 18-star Star Assault Set written [face-covering][face-covering]