I Asked You to Make a Game, So Why Did You Scare the Judges Unconscious?

Very beautiful!!! It satisfies people like me who like horror games but dare not play them hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha It's really fun to watch others being scared!!!!

My wild boar has finally eaten fine chaff. Now I see that I really like the male protagonist. His emotional intelligence is too high. I originally thought that this male protagonist was dispensable, but he conquered me with his personality charm 😳. Who said that this male protagonist is not good? This male protagonist is awesome. It's great, and the judge at the beginning is the first time I've ever seen an apology... The character description really shocked me 🐴 The supporting characters have been crammed in for a whole year, it's really not easy, I can see such a novel in my lifetime without any regrets. The most important thing is that this author knows how to use the big axis correctly! Who knows... Ever since I found out that the finale is the penultimate, it's really uncomfortable to see those who say it's the finale, and it's so uncomfortable to see others say 1+1=3 😢 Author boss, I want to follow you for the rest of my life!

The novel is well written, and the writing style can touch the heart even if it is not delicate. I also hope that you, the author, can break away from the elements of horror and explore more pan-horror themes. After all, it would be a pity not to have more colorful styles in virtual reality gaming devices like those in novels. For example, stories about zoo rules and monsters. Although this type of writing is not as easy to write as the fixed flow of regular horror games, the narrative methods are more diverse and can prevent some readers who already know the plot from reading without a sense of expectation. Of course, this will further test your plot control ability. After all, you have to get out of your comfort zone. Generally speaking, it is just a suggestion. I hope you will get better as you write.

Nice! It's so comfortable to watch! There are no judges who are crazy about the protagonist. When I saw the brother, I thought that a necessary female character would appear next to the popular protagonist. No cp, no ambiguity, no sister, no sister-in-law, no neighbor, eldest sister, no older sister. Comfortable...

It's a very good novel, I really like it. The most important thing is that there is no emotional drama, which is rare. It often appears in some men's novels. Once women comment on their body and appearance, there is no such behavior. The female team members during the competition are also normal people. They don't have any stereotyped behavior. They know that they are not good enough, so they will work hard and work hard. The portrayal of the protagonist is also very good, and the portrayal of some supporting characters is not brainless. There are some cool points, but coupled with some sophistication and a warmer atmosphere, this book looks very positive. As for the design of some competitions, there are loopholes in it if you look carefully, but it is very novel. Generally speaking, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The descriptions of various game plots or some environments are very detailed. In order to get a better understanding, I even went to site b and read all the related games written about it, so I can see that the author has done the information and is very serious about restoring these things. I think the relationship between the protagonist and his younger brother is a pure relationship between relatives and brothers. The writing is very moving. The feeling of supporting and encouraging each other and moving forward reminds me of my mother and I. The author also said that they are pure brothers, so don't you like the orthopedics in the comments? I would like to tell you in advance that I would like to say something like "kowtow", just to prevent you from misunderstanding. Generally speaking, it is a very good book. Although it has a little bit of routines, it is refreshing and warm due to the author's control of emotions and atmosphere, which is a very good advantage. However, some details such as the design review in the competition still need to be carefully considered. It can be regarded as a relatively good book on making games. If the total score is 9 points out of 10, it is a good book. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

It looks good. So far, there are really no messy emotional lines. The character of the protagonist is also quite likable. The younger brother is also very cute as a supplement to the daily line. Finally, she is not a cheesy little sister. The selection of games is good, and there are no particularly unpopular horror games. At least I am familiar with the games the author has written so far, and I have watched many live broadcasts. The types are not single, both Chinese and Western. The author also created a Chinese-style horror map of ghost phobia. It is quite interesting to look at. I hope I can write about this map again if I have the opportunity in the future. The main plot is quite clear so far. There is no situation where the protagonist does not know what he is doing. The most important thing is that there is no disgusting and brainless villain. The current villains do have conflicts of interest with the protagonist, and the conflicts are reasonable. The most annoying thing is to see the kind of villain who inexplicably targets the protagonist. This book does not exist yet, and this must be praised. The design of the competition is quite reasonable. There is artificial intelligence in the worldview that can really erase a lot of unreasonable things. The scoring system is not obtrusive and the logic chain is self-consistent, which is great. I hope that the character design of teammates can be more three-dimensional in the future. I hope that the author can work harder to update his teeth and be more diligent. He could have made a living in the past, so give it a try. I'm optimistic about you.

I have read some articles on game production and the like intermittently before, but this one is my favorite now. Originally, I paid special attention to the ratings when reading books. Now, the books I read must be at least 9 points or above. Even if I read too many books with 9.5 Points or above and read 9.2 Or 9.3, I will hesitate to enter the comment area to constantly determine what is wrong... Reading books is very time-consuming, so I really don't want to read half of it. It is too uncomfortable to be dismissed by the poisonous points. However, this book can be considered relatively new and the rating is not complete. The main reason is that I have seen the recommendation list several times. After reading the introduction, I thought it was okay and then read many reviews. Except that the character of the male protagonist's brother is more feminine and the detailed description of the game content is slightly controversial, there seems to be nothing, so I made an exception and took a look... Then I finished reading it in one breath 🤦... Although I have read articles about game production before, there are not many that specifically write about horror games like this one, and the horror games written about really immerse me even less. I am actually very interested in themes such as horror and suspense, but I am too timid so I rarely play horror games (I really don't dare to whine 😢). The only possibility is I've played a little bit of the Paper Wedding Dress series, but that doesn't stop me from yearning for it… Some of the literary horror games I've seen before were basically about campus horrors, abandoned hospitals, and other themes, with almost no specific game reference, but this one is real. The author also recommended game screen recording (the one with pure black Silent Hill). The key point is that I even watched the half-hour screen recording twice!!! (It's unbelievable to think about it now) But it's quite novel. I used to only read novels and write about horror games. For the first time, I can know what the games I wrote will look like. The subsequent "Face" and "Ghostophobia" seem to be games that exist in reality. The only thing that may be bad is that there are actually very few game descriptions in the early stage. The content of the first three games is not much description, the sense of substitution is not that strong, and the main theme The speed of the game is very fast, so you may feel that you have no idea what the previous game is about and just jump to the next one (for a person like me who doesn't know anything about it, it will be a bit confusing), the pace is quite fast. The turning point of this article for me is actually "Fireworks". Compared with the previous games, the author of "Fireworks" used to participate in the competition wrote very detailed As a player, I wrote the entire game process in a very immersive way with the barrage. There were several major and interesting anchors who also switched perspectives in the middle. It was quite special. Anyway, gradually I became immersed in this game and watched the players solve the puzzles step by step. Then at the end, I cried when I watched the whole defense break. Yes, my tear level was low, but I watched it knowing that it might be touching. I still couldn't help but whine at those words. In fact, I didn't understand some parts very clearly (well, reading novels is always stored in my brain and I can't find them again), but the general story is relatively clear. As for the sentence "My body will not rot in the soil but in the sky" (to the general effect), I dismissed it when it appeared earlier (it's just a poetic sentence), and I burst into tears at the end. . . From this point on I became somewhat immersed in this book. Including the next two participating games "Escape" series and the latest "Dead Space". To be honest, if the game "Fireworks" is still a horror game genre that I prefer, it can be said that I could not imagine that I would have any relationship with them before reading this book... I am not very interested in escape games and horror games with science fiction, creatures, and interstellar elements. Interesting, or maybe I was so ignorant that I didn't know that these were a type of horror games before. The amazing thing is that the detailed plots and rhythm of these games written by the author after "Fireworks" surprised me so much that I actually read them with gusto. The themes that I was originally not interested in are now surprisingly fascinating. Looking at the situation of the players, I really feel worried for them. And "Midnight Harem at Freddy's", well, I cried again after watching it. . . I really liked the rhythm from the end of reading this novel. Although I don't understand and dare not play these horror games, when I read it, I really felt like I was "playing" the game. It was this rare sense of immersion that made me like this book very much, and at the same time I also understood it to a certain extent. I picked up some settings that I was not interested in before, such as biological experiments and star battleships. I will write about the back room later depending on the author's intention, including the beginning of Cthulhu. These are things I have heard of before but don't understand, so reading this article gave me a novel experience. Looking forward to the follow-up~❤️ Also, I specially found some music for the sake of immersion, and played it every time when I got to the game content. Now I feel scared when I listen to that music... I feel tired and excited at the same time... After reading this article, I searched for articles of the same type, but I couldn't find anything I liked, so I came back and waited for the update, and I quickly wrote a comment. Regarding the issue of the male protagonist's younger brother, I think some people think it's better to change it to a younger sister if it's a bit more feminine, emmm… Anyway, I read this book after reading this issue, and I didn't find it that strange. I can only say that the male protagonist's younger brother is cuter? And there is really no feminine description. Except that playing cosplay may make some people feel like girls, but I think it is quite normal for boys to play cosplay. Moreover, the male protagonist's younger brother is more sensible and well-behaved, and may not be like the naughty boys usually written about. The author also explained this. The male protagonist's parents died early and the younger brother has always been afraid of being abandoned by his brother. He has been very sensible since he was a child, which is quite heartbreaking, and the brotherhood is really good. As the author said, they only have each other. Personally, I don't think it's toxic, or I don't think there is such a problem. Finally, the author said that he has not been in a good state recently, and praised the author for writing very well. If you are tired, you can rest and adjust. Pay attention to your body, and your mood is also very important ❤️ I really think this article is very good, and I hope it will get better and better. Come on! 💕 (Although I love writing long reviews, this is the first time for me to write such a long review. Thank you, the author, for writing so well. I couldn't help but whimper 😢 [air kiss])

It's very interesting… It's a bit like a national sports article, but a national sports article is not worthy of www. Laodachao. Com!!! The characters are very three-dimensional, with both positive and negative characters, but there are also well-written, gray-toned characters (see Fu Haotian/It's called this for details). I don't feel the forced patriotism, and the slap-in-the-face plot is also (yes, it is very enjoyable to write, but not brainless). I can't say much about the writing, but at least the writing is smooth, the plot is compact, and there is a certain logic. The only and biggest problem is that it is so short, author - please update more!!!

It looks good, and I haven't seen a lot of girls stick to it when they see it, or a lot of girls stick to it. There isn't too much pretense and slaps in the face, and it looks very comfortable*͈ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈ෆ

It looks pretty good so far. There are no messy things, so you can just play the game without any worries. Recommend some games: the Japanese horror "Zero" series and the "Dead Soul" series, both are very good. The plot is excellent, the characters are beautiful, the attack methods are novel, etc. Next is the "Extreme Panic" series. Fear comes from insufficient firepower? Other games may be right, but in this series of games, with guns, cannons and mechas, should you be scared or scared? Part one or two of "Dead Space" can also be arranged if suitable. After all, science fiction, horror and survival are still very interesting.