Gender Swap: I'm Fighting Magical Maple Syrup, Is This for Real?

It's a good book. The highlight of this book is that the main character changes into a lot of things, has fun with the camera, has a series of cute characters, and is incompetent and furious after being fucked. The main character's vest protection is also a good setting. After integrating the readers' and my feelings, now our expectation is that the protagonist will be transferred, or the protagonist will have his own cp. As the plot progresses, it can be seen that the plot is more related to the main plot than to the main plot. There are two directions now (in my opinion): one is to sit in an evil organization. The advantage of this is that it can better satisfy the protagonist's personality - he likes taking pictures, and the commander-in-chief's behavior can create good material. And it is also good for continuing to shape the character of the protagonist. The best thing for the author is... The number of words can be equal to the main plot (I, the author, also agree) The other is to join the magical girl. This line may not have many people, but the advantage is that it can deepen the connection with the evil organization and complete another plot direction. It can also satisfy the needs of some readers who want the protagonist to defeat CG, and there will be more original plots. I hope that the protagonist's camp will be established quickly, because first, the protagonist is a time traveler, and she (he?) Will subconsciously pay attention to the plot characters. Having no camp does not fit with her background, and will also reduce the sense of involvement. Second, the protagonist's character is a bit of a bitch (apologies for stepping on the thunder), with contrasts and fun, because a character with such a complex personality and a certain mind does not support the neutral camp. Third, the protagonist is not a very strong character, so neutrality is not supported. And if the goal of the neutral line must be achieved, a large amount of space must be used to improve the strength, but this will run counter to the readers' expectations. If the length is shorter, the rationality of the plot will be sacrificed. I have already made such a mistake once, and I don't want the author to make such a poisonous point again. To sum up, this is a very good fantasy fan novel, the protagonist is very likeable, and the current plot is also very coherent. I listed my directions and expectations. I hope the author can try his best to complete this book without leaving it unfinished. On this basis, it is best to write more and expand the world view. Finally, I hope that the author's writing will get better and better, and I wish the author good health and all the best. [Laugh]

Come on, big brother who writes brilliant books.

It turned out to be a rare magic book, ahahahahahah [love]

It's really cool. I really want to see him knocked unconscious by the commander-in-chief.

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle

At present, I feel that this is a very good fanfic about becoming a demon. The author's writing style is quite good. At least I feel comfortable reading it (it's not some kind of letter attribute attack). The character development in it is similar to that in the original work. At the same time, the protagonist is a fun-loving person who is more to my taste rather than the usual weak-suffering protagonist in Bailitou (maybe he is a tsundere?). There are also some redundant points in the article that the author has also considered and solved. I feel like one of the few problems is... The author updates it too slowly, and it's not enough to read! ! ! (Actually, as long as the writing is good, one or two updates a day is fine...) In addition, the author seems to want to add something to the background of the demon, such as the world view of other magical girls... (After all, I feel that if this is the only thing, there will be nothing to write about soon) In short, my current impression is very good, and I really hope to see the plot where the protagonist is severely adjusted by the commander-in-chief. As long as it doesn't crash, I will keep following this book (provided that the school is on holiday...) Finally, author, hurry up and give me a hard time! ! ! (Just kidding, just don't break it and stop updating it)

I can give this book a 4⭐ on Yangpersimmon. Of course, I would give it a lower score on some other platforms. Next is the reading experience: Let me talk about the conclusion first. This book gave me a "cheap" feeling. "Cheap" here is not completely derogatory, but refers to a kind of candy similar to the colorful candy wrappers we ate when we were children. It does not have fine polishing and beautiful packaging. But at that time, eating it was still very satisfying. "Cheap" also means that the threshold is low and it is quick to obtain. It is the same type as this book [fan fiction], so I won't go into details here. Relatively speaking, as I said, it's "cheap" and lacks staying power. It doesn't have a good basis for people to stay and watch after the novelty wears off. [Lily] This kind of subject matter is a beautiful vision in my opinion, the delicate emotional blending between beautiful girls. It's like two bright moons in a clear and shallow pool. When their outlines touch lightly, there is a slightly rippling halo of light that cannot be distinguished from each other. There is a layer of warm, honey-colored amber between the sight and the sight. All the unspoken words, all the gentle vibrations in the chest, were condensed in the transparent medium, slowed down, and could be seen clearly. The unintentional touch of the fingertips under the body, the echo is like a confession, melting into the soft body; an answer has been given before the other party asks the question, and the tacit understanding builds a world without words. If you keep up the good work, the author keeps writing about "fast food", you may soon face your own dissatisfaction.

Good-looking [laughing][laughing] It's when the protagonist gets teased [shy]

It's good to watch, so good to watch, but I don't know if there is an original plot in the back. If there is no original plot, the main plot of dreaming of becoming a magical girl is actually not that long.

Cool😋 When a man sees menstruation, a woman sees her nerves. This is the nemesis of depression and the alarm clock of a vegetative state. It is so beautiful that the five-guaranteed households in the village miss and love the widow. It is so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. It is so beautiful. It's God, it's me, the rose illuminates my dark life, it makes my world meaningful, I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony on the 20th floor, which makes me realize that God does exist, and I am so beautiful that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.