A Workaholic Magical Girl Wants to Fake Her Death and Retire Every Day

From my perspective, the writing is still very good. On a more daily basis, the relationship between the protagonist and his sister is also very good. If possible, you can add some memories, such as interactions with teammates. This type of book may be a bit too much, but the author's writing is still very good, really good. Come on, boss! (⸝⸝⸝>`ˊ<⸝⸝⸝)

I originally thought it would be a similar theme to others, but it turned out to be a bit beyond expectations. After looking at the previous daily life, the first big event is indeed a bit exciting. The clues were buried very early, and now it's the delicious part where the old team members come to visit. It's worth watching.

It looks good. I would like to give the author a few comments: 1. Regarding the problem of paragraphing, you can try dividing a paragraph into several lines. There are too many whole paragraphs of text that make people not want to read. 2. The pace is a bit slow. It can be a dull daily life, but the lack of "explosive points" is too boring and will not attract people. 3. There are many similar themes on Tomatoes, and a unique plot may help to make it popular (?)

I've read almost fifty chapters, and the writing is okay. Please support this type of writing! I just wanted to ask when will it completely change? It won't always be like this for men and women to cut each other off, right? Author, you wrote in the introduction that it will change, but why do you feel like you didn't see many clues? Did I accidentally open the Crimson King? Or is this a super long story and I haven't written it to that point yet? 🥺[Please update]

Hajime, you are right, but "Genshin Impact" is an open world adventure game produced and published by Shanghai MiHoYo Network Technology Co., Ltd.😱😱😱 The project was established at the end of January 2017. The original test started on June 21, 2019, the second test started on March 19, 2020, the departure test started on June 11, 2020, the PC version technical open test started on September 15, and the open beta started on September 28, 2020🤣🤣🤣. In terms of data, under the same official server, account data between iOS, PC, Android, and Hongmeng platforms are interoperable, and players can switch devices under the same account. Starting from January 20, 2026, the Xiaomi server of "Genshin Impact" will officially stop serving.😭😭😭. The game takes place in a fantasy world called "Tevat Continent", where those chosen by God will be awarded the "Eye of God" to guide the power of the elements. Players will play a mysterious character named "Traveler", and meet companions with different personalities and unique abilities during free travel, and work with them to defeat powerful enemies and retrieve lost relatives - at the same time, they will gradually discover the truth about the "Original God"😈😈😈. Awesome, NZD

Generally speaking, it is worthy of praise. The author's writing style has improved visibly, and the plot is also handled very well. Some regular authors can easily write vicious plots. The author has laid it out very well. I look forward to more.

It feels pretty good. I have already seen whether the protagonist has completely changed or not. Although the first part has a bit of AI polishing, when I read the second part, it felt like it was purely handwritten (although it may be that I didn't read it).

Eat too much, eat too much!!! Nothing too poisonous. If I have to say something, the pace and control of the first chapter need to be improved (if I have to criticize), but I highly recommend this book! (Chapter 2 only has more than 40 pictures, but I can already feel progress)

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It can be seen that the author's level is constantly improving. In the early stage, the writing method was a bit torturous, but later on, the writing got better and better, and it felt like it came naturally. The author says in the first chapter that it will never be updated, so this book is worth reading.