China's Card Master

This is the first time I read this kind of book, and I was immediately attracted to it. The writing is really smooth, and the combat part is great. The key is not all seriousness. Sometimes the plot is very relaxing. It's a great book. Anyway, I like it very much [Love]

Finally found this kind of card-making text, it's beautiful!

I really love this article, the description is very wonderful. The writing gave me just the right amount of pleasure. All in all, it's really great ୧(๑•̀◡•́๑)૭ However, can I make a small request to the author? (Hopefully there won't be a female protagonist) If that doesn't work, that's okay. [Laugh]

It's very interesting to watch, the protagonist's character is very good, the plot is smooth, and there's a good cp. But halfway through, I realized that the author had stopped updating and I instantly collapsed [crying]

I have read 10 chapters so far, and overall, the future is promising. Four stars fair review. The setting is okay, the writing style is a bit immature, and there are no major poisonous points. The overall language style is a bit serious and plain, and there are no jokes. There is relatively little description of the environment, and the fighting scenes lack detail. Let me complain about the fighting scenes. For example, when the protagonist first went to the competition, there was not much psychological description when he entered the ring for the first time, not even descriptions of excitement and calmness. There was not much description of the ring environment, nor the performance of the opponent, nor the distance between the two in the ring. It just said that the protagonist asked Hou Yi to shoot an arrow and then won. This seemed very bland and lacked details. When the protagonist competes with bronze-level and silver-level opponents, it feels like he wins quickly. According to the setting, it only took the protagonist one day to go from black iron to bronze, while the average genius took three to five days. Ordinary people felt that it took at least ten days, and it would take longer to go from bronze to silver. Even if the opponent was an ordinary person, it took a total of one month to go from black iron to silver. During this month, he participated in many competitions, but he didn't have any proper tactics (or the author didn't express it well in words). He was defeated by the protagonist in a few moments, which seemed very dull. In the first few chapters of the plot, the protagonist's performance was mediocre, with little emotional fluctuations and no goals. The plot was not developed and it was difficult to arouse interest in continuing reading. For me, the first ten chapters of the book are crucial and basically determine whether I can continue reading. I still prefer the setting of this book. I hope the author can improve his writing style and add some detailed descriptions. I will continue to watch. Come on, author! [Top post][blowing kiss]

Damn, I am a reader who has been attracted by you recently. This book is really good. The plot is novel, the rhythm of the story is well grasped, and all the characters are very distinct. Whether it is the protagonist or the supporting characters, each one is very vivid. The key is that I can see the youthful spirit in them. I rarely encounter novels that are so palatable. When I couldn't wait to read the following, I clicked on your homepage and found that you stopped updating. To be honest, I was really sad and went crazy for a long time. Such a good book and those young people should not stop now. So when I found out today that you had updated it, I was really surprised. I rarely write long reviews, but when I saw the author's words, I didn't know what happened, but I hope these words can give you some encouragement and tell me not to give up such a good story and such good protagonists for people who don't want it. (I think everyone in it is the protagonist) I really hope that I can continue writing it, because it is really beautiful [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [love]

Rating: High quality rations I have read a lot of card-making articles, and many of them use monopolizing Chinese culture and history as a golden finger. What the author does well is that he balances the combat power very well, and does not say that the protagonist will be invincible if he just makes a card. At the same time, he avoids the cliché plot of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, and making cards to steal the limelight at critical moments. But the bad thing is that the author feels that many plot points are not fully written. For example, only 70% of the plot that can be unfolded in this time period is written and then skipped to later. The story is also all on one big branch. The lack of some branch lines and "accidents" makes the overall plot less ups and downs and suspense. The presentation of the world view and the force setting are not outstanding enough or the appeal is still somewhat lacking. Generally speaking, the author knows what the readers want and implements it well, but the overall setting and story framework are still a bit immature. Be optimistic about the author and keep up the good work!

It's great. As long as you keep updating, I will keep watching. Don't be afraid that I will run away.

DaDa finally updated [crying]. This book is really good to read (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. The characters of both the supporting characters and the protagonist are very well described, very realistic and detailed. I like it very much, and the content is also very consistent with my imagination of a hot-blooded boy.

I'm finally back. I finally won the resurrection match after more than seven months. (☍⁰) Come on author, you are the best (⑉••⑉)‥♡