The World of Cards

I saw about 10 chapters, but didn't read the rest in detail. I'm just going to talk about the shortcomings that can be seen by just scanning them. The most obvious ones are: The introduction states that the protagonist was framed and his fate changed. Then the original fate of the protagonist should be written directly in the first few chapters, and then broken up in enough places. But what is described in it is that the protagonist draws cards--discards cards--goes home--unfamiliar elders are killed--is framed--is caught--takes out the SSR card. What is the original fate of the protagonist? This plot was not mentioned before, and it doesn't matter whether it is mentioned later or not. This is the biggest problem. There are also some other minor problems, such as common problems such as the character image and personality are not clear, and the development of the world view is too slow.

I don't know the training system. I'm a noob, but I still save this one and that one. I'm speechless.

It's bloody, it's bloody, the plot is corny, it's so fucking bloody, I won't want to read it until the first three chapters.

Don't look at it with your brain. A C-class card costs at least 100,000, an A-card costs 1 million, and an S-card costs 7/800 to 10 million. The protagonist used the so-called golden finger to close an SS card and owed 6.6 Billion. It just exploded [smile]

It's so poisonous. It's useless to write about education from the first chapter? The later part of the story about the protagonist's life experience is even more destructive. You know you have a mortal enemy and something he wants. When two people are already dead, if you don't tell the protagonist his life story, you should at least make some preparations. In the end, he is easily killed, and the protagonist only knows the beginning. The police were also described as being very brainless. They didn't collect any evidence, so they just resorted to recruiting, right? I started to extract a confession, and I must make the protagonist confess to the crime of murder. The protagonist is a rare weirdo. He is proficient in neon language, a brick, and a tofu. He dares to follow the killer who killed the second-level housekeeper. He is still sure that he has a chance of survival [awkward laugh] Where did you come to the conclusion, is it a tofu or a brick? Later, people wanted to search for souls, and threatened to kill them. He was very confident in the front, but now he broke through the defense again. I don't dare to read the rest of it, just these few chapters are a little bit toxic.

To be honest, don't you all here have some responsibility when you read this book?

Poison! Too poisonous! Can't stand it anymore

Too much poison, depressing

After reading more than 10 chapters, I still don't understand what the cards are used for. No introduction. Goodbye.

Mark it, the poison has been tested, it is real poison