I'm a Master Cardmaker, Crafting Cards of Gods and Demons

In the end, Zhao Long and his men were all defeated by Jiang Chen's sword. They lay on the ground, groaning in pain. Jiang Chen put away the Zixiao Sword, looked at Zhao Long coldly, and said, "Zhao Long, I'm just teaching you a lesson this time. If you dare to threaten Jiang Chen next time, the consequences will be even more serious! If anything happens to the children in the orphanage and the director, Jiang Chen will kill all of your Zhao family from old to young." Don't tell me this is your third person.

Let me give you three stars to encourage you. First, the switching between first-person and third-person. Second, is it possible to advance the lowest-level white card, Wine Sword Fairy? The third protagonist summoned the Jiu Sword Immortal. One did not call out his name, the other did not tell Lin Yanran in advance, the third Lin Yanran did not scan the Jiu Sword Immortal's data, and the fourth system did not prompt that it was the Jiu Sword Immortal who killed the enemy. So how did Lin Yanran know about Jiujianxian? Keep up the good work, author.

It's not that the writing is not good, it's just that when I read it, I couldn't react when the third person was switched and it was very confusing and troublesome 😢😢😢😢

The numerical values are serious and fatal, so severe that even the logical flaws in the first three chapters can be put aside. Chapter 4: Looking at his own attributes, Jiang Chen was stunned on the spot. His current blood volume was even higher than that of a level 30 human shield. After all, the starting level of the meat shield profession is 20 physical attributes. Each level up can only increase a little bit of all attributes, and the attributes obtained There are relatively few channels, such as a promotion trial every ten levels or some particularly high achievements. Furthermore, you rely on some elixirs, but the effect of elixirs on improving attributes is limited. Under the rules of heaven, all elixirs that increase attributes are restricted. The number of uses is limited. It can be seen here that I want to highlight the power of the protagonist, the terrifying profession, and the rareness of attribute points. Here is the key point. Still in Chapter 4, the protagonist who just mentioned how powerful he was, while holding a purple magic weapon, used a sword energy to repel a level 5 mob, repelling it! That's right, it's actually repelling! Brother, tell me, when attribute points are so difficult to get, it is comparable to the level 30 human race, and it is a relatively powerful level 30 skill that can only repel a level 5 mob! Little monster! Not even the BOSS! A little bit of skin was scratched after using one skill! Then why can the human race resist for hundreds of years? Is it possible that the human race can give birth and then be born until the alien race can no longer eat it?

Sometimes first person, sometimes third person

I'm not the author, buddy, I just want to change it a little bit. Why hasn't the first person in the beginning of these 30 chapters been changed? It looks like a diary. Although there is nothing wrong with it, it affects the reading experience.

A bit like AI

Very well written, cheers

It looked quite interesting at first, but became less and less interesting later on, becoming more and more like an AI mass-produced work.

It's okay, come on