
KO One: I Founded Suzuran High School While Still a Student
终极:学生的我,创办了铃兰高校
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- Ongoing
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- 3.1M Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Film & TV Fanfiction
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All-time: Reads, Flowers.
1.7kChapters
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234.2kMonthly reads
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I've seen 15 chapters so far, and personally, I feel that at most three chapters contain actual content; the rest are just various exclamations and exaggerated descriptions.
Can four people with a combat power of 1,000 defeat a person with a combat power of 4,000?
Initially, fifty people were summoned, but later the writing is inconsistent, sometimes saying thirty or forty, sometimes saying a densely packed number. How did you count them? How did you manage to make fifty people appear so densely packed? There were only fifty people; during the fight, it wasn't mentioned how many didn't appear. Does that mean they all came out? So where did the other ten go?
This is too weak, I really can't keep going. They clearly have the ability but they don't finish off their opponents, they let them go every time. The Sword Saint defeated the Black Dragon in one move, and the protagonist this time...
Author, you're really ruthless! You're going to completely destroy any goodwill you have left. Look at all the people you've talked to, and you keep doing this every day. You're a human being, and this isn't an attack, it's just me speaking on behalf of myself. You've never kept your word. I've pushed you to the limit.
If this formula continues, there's no point in reading this book; it has absolutely no plot.
Moreover, starting from the end of the first book, the rest of the story feels similar to the Joker book.
You've described a combat power index of over 500 points as an aura of over 10,000 points...
If you're going to write about the behind-the-scenes story, then write about the behind-the-scenes story properly. This kind of power struggle narrative has a slightly faster pace. Summoning a boss in ten or more chapters while there aren't any elite subordinates, only to have them show up in the last few chapters before release, is absurd.
This is a threat. I'm just telling you, if you don't update soon, I'm going to start looking for books that imitate your writing style and stories. If you don't update soon under these circumstances, I'm going to have to persuade those ghostwriters to write a fanfiction of your book.