Wuxia: Invited by Yaoyue to Go Undercover in the Embroidered Uniform Guard

Goodness! He cultivated the Mingyu Skill from a young age. He didn't reach the second level until he was twenty-two. In the original novel, it only took Ren Lianxing and Yaoyue twenty-four years to reach the eighth level of cultivation. The system that the protagonist only gets when he is eighteen years old. So how shameless did the protagonist have to say he wanted to marry Lianxing and Yaoyue?

This protagonist is such a waste! His innate talent and cultivation level are both low, yet he can still defeat someone a small cultivation level higher than him. So, if his junior brother has excellent innate talent and a high cultivation level, wouldn't he be able to easily defeat someone a whole cultivation level higher?

Your book is neither here nor there. If you're going to write a system novel, just write it properly. Why are you so pathetic when you have a system? If you're going to write a martial arts novel, just write it properly. One minute you're praising the system, the next you're talking about how powerful the martial arts characters are! Do you have a split personality?

Inviting the Moon sends you to infiltrate the Embroidered Uniform Guard; the Embroidered Uniform Guard sends you to infiltrate the Eastern Depot; the Eastern Depot sends you to infiltrate the Western Depot; the Western Depot sends you to infiltrate the Sun Moon Cult; the Sun Moon Cult sends you to infiltrate the Five Mountains Sword Sect; the Five Mountains Sword Sect sends you to infiltrate…

What kind of ridiculous martial art is the Seven Injury Fist? It doesn't even deserve to be compared to the Bright Jade Skill. Having transmigrated for over twenty years and knowing so many opportunities, why didn't you seize them? Your martial arts are utterly pathetic. And you even went to serve the imperial court.

So far, this book has two problems: 1. The protagonist wants to marry Yaoyue, who is his master. Yaoyue is difficult to pursue in herself, and her status as his master makes it even more difficult. This results in extremely slow progress in the protagonist's romantic storyline because he doesn't dare to touch any other women until he wins over Yaoyue. 2. The main plot is problematic.

There's no such thing as the eldest son of the Yihua Palace being an undercover agent for the Imperial Guard. It was just a hallucination caused by an electric shock from his gaming helmet before he died.

Since she's from the Yihua Palace, she should be called Hua Wuyou (meaning "Worry-Free Flower"). Her surname is Lin.

Once and again, things shouldn't go too far. If the protagonist were a man, he would have killed Wanwan. How dare the Yuan forces so openly assassinate a Ming commander? They've completely lost face. If Cao Cao knew this and said a few words to the Emperor, the Embroidered Uniform Guard would be labeled as useless, cowardly, and afraid of trouble.

It seems a bit absurd that Lianxing is not as strong as Zhao Min's subordinates. According to this setting, both palace masters should be Grandmasters.