As the Mizukage, Isn't It Only Natural to Have a Zanpakuto?

One Hyōrinmaru is enough. I could accept another one, Sode no Shirayuki. Don't you think Hyōrinmaru plus Ryūjin Jakka would be incongruous? Actually, just one Hyōrinmaru is enough to study for a lifetime. The author's development of Hyōrinmaru is very low. The author could have applied Ryūjin Jakka's skills to Hyōrinmaru.

Does the protagonist really like listening to the system that much? He resolutely refuses to kill anything the system forbids, but why did he let Shisui, who was just one hit away from dying, go along with it? I initially thought Shisui couldn't beat the protagonist and could escape using teleportation, but he was already stunned.

Seriously? Black Coffin killed the Tailed Beast, and Minato ate Black Coffin earlier and still survived until the end of the story. That's a bit ridiculous. What's the point of having a main character then? When he was killing the Uchiha, Future Sasuke interrupted. It seems you're afraid to kill off any of the characters with significant screen time in Shippuden. Ugh, seriously? Naruto ended so long ago, and you still can't separate the two in fanfiction. What's the point of writing this?

How can you praise Jiraiya so much? How many of his famous achievements are there? This is all jumbled up.

The author is completely afraid to create original plot points, and the reason they haven't killed anyone from Konoha is simply to fill space! Fighting only halfway through is impressive; honestly, there were so many things that could have been done after the fight was over.

They managed to kill Jiraiya, but he was so overpowered that he didn't even get killed before the game was released.

Danzo, a mere Karami, can fight Kisame Hoshigaki? Kisame is a formidable opponent who can single-handedly defeat the Eight-Tails; Danzo is merely a floor-level Kage.

The author of this book is a newcomer and has only written two books. The first one was finished before it even started. Hopefully, this one will be longer! Please be patient with the author, fellow readers; he will grow and improve.

If you have one Zanpakuto, then this book is worth reading; but once you have multiple Zanpakuto, there's absolutely no need to read it anymore.

The Shikai and Bankai are supposed to enhance strength, but in the protagonist's hands they seem to be just ordinary ultimate moves!