Hogwarts: I’m Tom, and I’m Really Not the Dark Lord

Your book has the same problem as the previous one. It has a lot of awesome abilities and has long been invincible. It still has various writing abilities and a lot of powerful magics, but they are not used at all. It is just all kinds of equipment every day. Even the equipment does not use magic. Then what is the use of writing so many powerful magics?

It's really weird. The plot of Liwei doesn't show where Liwei is. Instead, the old guy of the family pretends to be in front of the protagonist. Not to mention Zaiguang, at least the three generations of middle, young and young are wiped out, and then put a curse on this bloodline. Is it okay? It's too anticlimactic.

Adaptation is not random editing, drama is not nonsense. After reading dozens of chapters, the writing is not realistic at all. I can only say that the author forced his wits down. Not only does it lower the character's IQ, but it also wants to bring the people who read the book to the same level. He likes to cause trouble so much, and he still does it in Liyue Mondstadt. Zhongli, Wendy will be the first to kill you. Others are just good-tempered. Do you really think the devil is easy to talk to? It's easy to say that thousands of years ago, it wouldn't be Zhongli and Wendy's turn to be the ruler of this world. It's okay if you make a small fuss, like in the book. If the author hadn't forced his wits down, to be honest, the protagonist's grave would have been a hundred meters high.

To put it bluntly, Daphne is not worthy of being the head wife. She cannot suppress the people below her. If she is too partial, problems will arise sooner or later. The most annoying thing is that you have to participate in the competition, and then you fail. As soon as you think about it, it comes out

Man, the lead female lead is getting more and more annoying the more I write about it, why don't I let her down and replace her with a female lead?

To be honest, the more I write, the more I feel like I can't support the protagonist. Many people don't like this. You said he helped the protagonist in the beginning? It doesn't help much, but your writing is getting more and more reckless.

The school beauty is a bit arrogant, and the protagonist is also a bit licky.

Are you going to go out of your way to explain this? It's all finalized, so there's no need for it. This isn't just a waste of points and words, and is this explanation useful?

Such a boring assessment, purely to reduce the reader's intelligence.

The author has added a lot of things to expand the worldview, but these new settings don't appeal to me. Is there any Harry Potter fanfic that doesn't expand some enemies that are not in the original work?