Hogwarts: I’m Tom, and I’m Really Not the Dark Lord

I've ordered both this book and Wayne's book, and I've been following them closely. They all seem to have made the same mistake: they quickly become invincible. The Harry Potter universe is only so big, and the strength of the characters is only so-so. In these two books, including Dumbledore, I feel like they've already given him a boost.

Your book has the same problem as the previous one: it's full of overpowered abilities that make you invincible, yet you keep writing about them, cramming on all sorts of powerful spells, but you never actually use them. It's just constant showing off. Even your equipment doesn't use magic. So what's the point of writing all that about powerful magic?

The author still thinks it only violated the Feilu style and doesn't think he did anything wrong. Do you know how overpowered this plot is? The protagonist's current strength is third in the world after Old Deng and Old Ge, the kind that can crush everyone else, but when he tries to establish his authority, he doesn't dare to kill anyone. And did he succeed in establishing his authority?

It's really bizarre. The plot supposed to establish authority didn't really achieve anything. Instead, it just had the old man from that family showing off in front of the protagonist. He should have at least wiped out three generations—young, middle-aged, and old—if not all of them, and then placed a curse on that bloodline. It was such a weak and anticlimactic ending.

I just finished reading the latest chapter. I thought the protagonist would unleash powerful magic to awe the magical world, but instead, he pulled off a brutal, hand-to-hand combat system? Seriously? A magical world where you play hand-to-hand combat? And then, after all that big stuff, he says, "I didn't want to kill anyone, so why are you even here?"

I saw comments saying she was a pimp? Seriously? Fine, if the female supporting character doesn't want to be a pimp, fine, but can you please stop being a pimp? **

Why do the main characters look so stupid in the latest two pictures?

This babysitter role came out of nowhere! One minute they were saying they'd hide their abilities and not be too flashy, not hanging around Harry too often, and then suddenly, Harry and his friends got points deducted for their night out, and the protagonist inexplicably appeared as their babysitter, then showed off right in front of Old Man Duncan.

The protagonist shouldn't always be thinking about playing matchmaker. If the author can't get rid of this habit, I'll keep criticizing him until he does.

Stop talking nonsense. What rejection? If Old Graham had set fire to Paris and no one had stopped him, countless people would have died or been injured. But nothing happened, and he even walked away gracefully.