KO One: I'm a Storyteller! Spoiling the Plot from the Start

This author can do it, let him renew his liver, he is really liver, not bad, not bad

The shooting distance of Qin Nu is about 600 meters

Ace: Whitebeard be my son.

I was born in China, but I yearn for the United States. I yearn for that beautiful land. I hope you can remember my name... Dongfeng 41 intercontinental surface-to-surface ballistic missile

I found that no one has written about the twelve mythical beasts of time and space. I think the twelve mythical beasts should correspond to the twelve zodiac animals. The so-called golden space-time is the flying sacred cow, the silver space-time is the sacred chicken, and the iron space-time has not mentioned the others. I don't know about the other ones. The pit of mythical beasts has never been filled.

The role played by the protagonist in this article, no matter which one it is, as long as it is not too obvious that it is not a native ability; even if it is discovered, it can be said to be a copy. I use your ability to beat you, and I use it better than you. But the non-protagonist characters and teammates should preferably all have their own national characteristics. At the very least, their names and languages ​​should be changed! It is best to write about the country's ability, whether it is immortal or martial! This can better mobilize the enthusiasm, enthusiasm and identity of the local people! Or something with similar abilities is fine, as long as it's not too obvious. Teammates can be ordinary, the protagonist can have one god and nine pits, or red one, but they must have similar unique abilities in their country.

I don't know if the author hasn't read the original work, or if he added the plot himself? There is no Ten Thousand Demons Conference in the original work. But the Kingdom of the West. The war with the Leopard Clan. It's not that there is no such thing in the original work of The Ten Thousand Demons Conference. This war happened to be when Inuyasha was sealed. The plot time is almost right, but your plot is not reasonable enough. In the original sentence, many monsters are afraid of Sesshomaru. The reason is this war, because this war is controlled by Sesshomaru. The reason why Sesshomaru dislikes Inuyasha very much is that he didn't come to this war. There are also some plots that don't match up.

Did the author think Beiming Shen Gong was a little too powerful? In the world of martial arts, Bei Ming Sheng Kung is not as powerful as the martial arts absorbing method, which is ranked number one in the world. Their martial arts absorbing method can not only absorb the martial arts, but can also turn the opponent's martial arts moves and mental techniques into one's own. In addition, Xia Kexing is considered top-notch among Zhongwu, but average among Gaowu.

A pile of daddy, a pile of old and smelly daddy

Full level, explain what is full level