Hogwarts: the White Devil from Slytherin

The first part was well written, but the second part was a little out of touch with the early rhythm. I could only endure it until chapter 110, and going from more than 90 chapters to 110 chapters (I didn't know how it went later) was like changing the author. First, write the protagonist directly as a passer-by. Insert a sentence from the protagonist in the middle of several stories. You can still understand it a little bit when you write Harry. You also write about the Weasley twins in a large space; Then the author begins to fall into a common poisonous point: using some convoluted words and nouns to explain the power system. Regarding the paragraph about alchemy, to be honest, it doesn't matter if you don't write it. It would be great if you could write it clearly. But you wrote such a long paragraph that few people can understand, which involves the soul, idealism, ether and some philosophy. This is not the way you want readers to understand; Finally, there is the biggest poisonous point: the protagonist is bound by the so-called fate, or even defeated by fate, so what is the use of your hard work in shaping the character of the protagonist who can face things with ease?

The Weasley children are sorted into Slytherin. Let's see if you can accept this.

The book on homeschooling is very good at the beginning, but there is a bit too much about politics and it is not very interesting. I hope to write more about homeschooling.

It was okay at first, but became boring as it went on. Blindly showing off one's own magic fantasy, the story falls apart

Damn it, it's over, it's over, it's over (′へ`,)

I want to ask, is it multiple heroines or single heroine?

The book is obviously quite good, but the update once a day is too slow, and everyone is gone

When I arrived in the United States, too many names popped up all of a sudden.

I've finished reading the free chapter, it's not bad, it's quite interesting.

It's not bad. You can think about logic and everything.