From Hogwarts to Stritchhaven

Ah, I'm not happy. It looked good from the beginning, but after reading Chapter 74, it suddenly became terrible. Disgusting Cassandra, voyeur... The next two chapters show that he has created a garbage familiar and won't let his master touch it. He is convinced.

One: Before going to Middle-earth, count the food and grass. Two: Middle-earth, average. Three: From Returning to Middle-earth to Before Going to Strehaven, Hay-, the main original work. Four: Starting from Striderhaven, it's boring. It's better to go to GAI in the multi-dimensional world.

What does the recent plot have to do with the protagonist?

I feel like this book can be divided into three stages: The first stage is before the shuttle. I feel that the author is still groping and has no clear idea. With the appearance of Cassandra, the setting is interesting, and the result is a pile of extra chocolate. The second stage is the prequel to The Lord of the Rings, which is pretty well written and looks like a normal dish. The third stage is the return. The first few pictures were interesting and interesting, and I wanted to read them. From December onwards, they just followed the original works, which were completely boring and tasteless. I'm waiting to see it for now, and will check the quality later.

First of all, I would like to apologize to all readers who have had a bad reading experience! Bow, kneel down, bang bang bang, kowtow three times. In fact, I really didn't expect that the plot of that chapter would cause so many waves. Cassandra has always been a tool in my outline to advance the plot, and that chapter really didn't handle it well. The new author is still not good enough and failed to take good care of the readers' emotions. He just followed the outline and wrote down. If people don't like her, I will definitely reduce her role in the plot appropriately. However, because I have conceived a lot of foreshadowing on her, how to make readers accept it delicately is indeed the issue I have to consider next. Furthermore, I hope that I can encourage my readers and friends. If I have written something poorly, I would like you to correct me. It would be better if the words were less intense... However, I know that everyone's feelings have been hurt, and it is necessary to vent your emotions. But I hope that after venting your emotions, you can continue to point out subsequent improvements and help me write this book well and finish it. Because in the creation process of online articles, readers and authors have always been one and the same. Failure to obtain a good reading experience in an online article is actually a harm to both. Hurturing each other is obviously not what we want to see, because no reader wants to eat shit, and no author wants his or her work to be evaluated as shit. So communication is the solution to problems. Finally, dear readers, I would like to express my gratitude to you again. I hope to encourage you in the coming days!

I don't know why, but almost everyone who writes about Harry Potter fan fiction is on Dumbledore's team. I read the original article carefully and found that I can't be on Dumbledore's team at all. First, what was Harry's life like before he was eleven years old? Dumbledore doesn't know? Is it difficult to improve Harry's life? Among other things, giving Dursley a sum of money every year can change Harry's life to a great extent, right? Even if Dumbledore didn't come up with the money, would it be difficult to exchange some gold galleons for pounds from the Potter family's treasury? Second point, Dumbledore actually used the Sorcerer's Stone to introduce Voldemort into the school just to train Harry? What kind of horrible idea is this? What did he think of the other students? The novel is written that no other students were injured, but if the three-headed dog is placed in the school and the door of the three-headed dog is closed, any student who can use the opening spell can open it. What a** joke The third point is the infinite protection of Gryffindor. Harry and the others got into trouble every day and did not study seriously. As a result, they found various reasons to give them extra points to win the Academy Cup. There are so many more that I don't even want to talk about. I don't understand why such a selfish, indifferent, and biased person has so many people writing fan stories and siding with him and praising him every day.

Grindelwald didn't seem to appear much, and Naniji's blood curse was also a subject of research, so he died just like that?

Spell slot? After working for a long time, you have to set up the spell in advance. Isn't this a restriction for yourself?

Who is the heroine? I want to know.

As the title states, I read it during a limited-time exemption, so the rating goes up to one star. Let's talk about the advantages first First, the mechanism is well integrated, not too abrupt, and quite thoughtful. Secondly, the plot progresses relatively smoothly in the general direction, and there are not many disturbing places that forcibly suppress intelligence. Let's talk about shortcomings First, the fusion mechanism is enough. Add those inexplicable damage values ​​and it will be very funny. Second, there is too much watering in the middle with these settings, and it seems awkward to copy large sections. If you want to add settings and backgrounds that have little to do with the plot, just add a picture and put it at the back. Placing a large area in the text will affect the reading experience, and it may even feel like the author is committing fraud😓.