The Day of Drawing Cards at Hogwarts

The so-called sleepers can be summed up in eight words: spring sleepiness, summer fatigue, autumn nap, and hibernation.

Make a wish for a strong fire, just one short of a strong fire, and you will have it all. The result of what you want most is a strong fire, and it never comes out!

1: Fill the plot with water. Every time the protagonist gets something, a special experience must be added. The key is that this experience doesn't have much effect on the main plot. What the author writes is not particularly attractive, making it a bit boring. Two: Questions about the system. The protagonist increases his talents by drawing cards, but apart from the prophecy talents, I think it is well written. As for other talents The author has been writing very well, but I feel that it is only very powerful on paper. Most of the protagonist's adventures are solved by the ring that can transform into magical animals, which does not make me feel that his magic is very powerful. And I rarely see Harry Potter fics where the main character can't cast the Patronus Charm by Harry Potter's third year. (This is originally the point where the protagonist pretends to be 13) More importantly, Hermione can cast the Patronus Charm, so the author is telling me that the protagonist has added so many talent points through the system, but in the end it is not as powerful as the crowned Hermione, is that right? Three: The problem of protagonist creation. I think that in a good fanfic, the protagonist should have a certain personality charm. For example, he is very smart, he is very self-disciplined, he has strict requirements for himself, or he is very diligent, he is very cautious, or he is gentle and has high emotional intelligence. It just makes people feel that ordinary people cannot do this, and having a system is just the icing on the cake. The protagonist created by the author gives people a sense of arrogance, arrogance, and mysterious self-confidence. For example, the plot where he pretended to be a teacher was unreasonable in my opinion. On the one hand, although this teacher is a deceiver, he is committing a crime by tying up and imprisoning him, which is equivalent to killing a murderer. I don't think Dumbledore will condone this behavior; on the other hand, as a teacher, it is not enough for the protagonist to rely on puppets. He has to teach magic knowledge and new magic to Grades 1 to 7. I think this can gain the respect of students. But if it were written like this, the battle line would collapse. Secondly, the protagonist's attitude towards the soul system also makes me feel very strange. He found out that the diary was lost, so he went to the secret room to kill the basilisk, and then he felt that there was no problem, so did he look down on Voldemort in his youth? Shouldn't he try his best to find the diary? And he is also a diviner, and his talent for divination should be even better than Grindelwald. But tell me, where is the location of the Horcrux that he can't figure out? (The author probably didn't write that Horcruxes cannot be divined.) Even if he couldn't find it, he should try his best to find it. As a result, the protagonist was peacefully attending class there, and when he went to the Room of Requirement to look for the diadem, he found that he couldn't find it. The explanation given by the author was that there were too many things in it, but he couldn't find them, so he stopped looking. It's like your house is in chaos, but you know that someone put a bomb in your house, and if you can't find it, you don't look for it. Aren't you sick? Also, he found that there was something wrong with the female villain's character. He said it was Dumbledore's business, but he didn't tell Dumbledore. As long as he could open his mouth at that time, I think the subsequent plot would basically not have happened. Finally, if he can perfectly counter-kill the enemy in the end, then I think the writing is pretty good. But in the end, he was almost killed by the enemy. Doesn't that prove that his previous behavior was stupid?

Is there anyone we can play with? I'm from the Lion Court.

I haven't used any magic, it's basically useless. I rely on a transformation ring to get around the world. I rely on three-headed dogs to fight. Magic is no different from decorations. 110. The protagonist has never used more than 3 magics. I'm really speechless.

It's obviously a magical world, but the protagonist basically doesn't use magic. He can travel all over the world with a transformation ring, and he can no longer stand it when he transforms into Lockhart. What's the use of learning spells? What's the use of increasing talents? You don't use anything and just rely on transformation. You might as well not write about the magical world and write about Kamen Rider.

When I read Chapter 26, even though the book was finished and there was no point in talking about it, I still felt unhappy. Isn't the level limit of this system just a side effect? Do you need to complete tasks to increase the level of a spell? Can't you study by yourself? Are talents purely used to increase experience? If the level is always suppressed by breakthrough tasks, then what's the use of having higher talents? Shouldn't it be that the higher the talent, the faster you can get started, the faster you improve, and the easier it is to get inspiration for improvement? I have never played Genshin Impact, but after reading some book reviews, this breakthrough system is also included? If something is good, you can copy it, but if something is unpleasant, why should you copy it? What if the proficiency requirement is increased? 100 To 1000 to 10000 Or there are some special levels that need to be broken through, such as level 4 to level 5, level 8 to level 9. Want to break through from level 1? There are so many magic spells, but you can only do tasks in the future?

Is this book a single heroine, Hermione?

I have finally reached the sixth level. Do you know how I got here in the past few years?

The content is as light as water and I have no desire to read it.