Hogwarts, but 1960
by Passers-by Outside The Post Office
About This Novel
It is the first time for a novice to write a book. The main feedback so far is that the first fifty chapters are not very good, and then the writing gets better and better, so readers who are concerned can skip chapter fifty before reading. Please give your children more opportunities. Hogwarts is a great school! The Order of the Phoenix is a great team! Albus Dumbledore considered himself a good leader. But when he walks in his team, Old Dengtou had some subtle doubts: Severus, Lupin, Lily... I'm here, why don't you sit down? Oh, it turns out that Aiden hasn't come yet. This time traveler who was born in 1960 has accumulated strength and united his team little by little. The story of finally achieving HE. I hope there will be less regret and sadness in this story. After all, who can use their brains?
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Official(16)Scraped 5d ago
Hard to comment
In order to save a stranger who was a foreigner whom he had never met before, and to convey the message, the protagonist chose the stupidest way, inflicted serious injuries on himself and went to the hospital. The Holy Mother shook her head when she saw it, and the author was so moved that it was purely a self-titled article.
Isn't the protagonist too lenient? At the age of five, he risked his life to lead a fake magic riot to seriously injure himself just for a Remus Lupin he had never met. Isn't this nonsense? How many saints must have such an idea, and are they not afraid of being suspected by Dumbledore?
No wonder this novel is free for members only
The author is a Dumbledore, and the character he wrote should be the kind of extremely disgusting character that is the subject of online conspiracy theories. Therefore, the protagonist looks like if he is even a little genius, others will check his brain, doubt him, supervise him, etc. Although the comments do not approve of it and think that the protagonist seems to be crazy. Then the protagonist is not yet 12 years old, and he has done many things, interfered with the fate of others, and was injured himself. He is in a state of confusion, and it feels like the protagonist is sick. There is a saying in the review that is very good. The protagonist should be directly injured and become a squib. Gaining and losing is the biggest punishment for a person. This is in line with the protagonist's mental illness.
Strong cheat (system type) + time travel, if you can't speed pass within 100 chapters (HP fan kills Voldemort with the middle finger), then it's either bad or poorly written. However, this did not happen during the original plot, so it must not be water. It can only be said that the author did not consider how powerful the script add-on is, which makes the level unreasonable, especially when the system is still so awesome from the factory. It is recommended that HP fan fiction not write a combination of system and time travel (knowing the script), otherwise the content will be very boring. Just choose one of the two at will and weaken one of them, and you can also write the process of the protagonist's decryption/growth. It is much better than the NT pseudo-invincible that uses the same system to intensify the current novels (it is obvious that it can be invincible, but it has to be carefully developed and has to follow the plot, especially the kind of SB that emphasizes that if you don't follow the plot, you will lose the advantage of the script). The writing is much better.
At the beginning, I was thinking about how to clear myself in front of Lao Deng. How dark is the protagonist?
This is my first time writing a book. If you have any comments, please leave them here.
First of all, thank you for your full support yesterday. It is really the first time that I have received so many monthly votes and recommendations. Then, if you want to be classmates with Regulus Black and Rita Skeeter, you can start drawing character cards.
Come on, come on, I feel like it's not enough
This is the first book for a newcomer. If you have any comments, please share it.
After all, this is a votive article. I want it to be as gentle and fulfilling as possible. I hope everyone will support me. Oh, by the way, Rita Skeeter and Regulus Black will enter school next year. If you want to be classmates with them, you can create character cards here. I will try to use them as much as possible😂
Is Dumbledore also going to become a man where magic is power?
If the Squib thing is successfully solved, then Dumbledore will also become a person who believes that magic is power, right? After all, Sirius cannot be cleared until death, which means that Dumbledore is not a person who believes that magic means power. All I can say is that it depends on how the author writes it. But there is one sentence that you can think about. If it is a purely refreshing article, pretend that I did not say it; if it is not a purely refreshing article, I just want to say that the world is inherently unfair and tragedies occur all the time.
It's all system-based and still subject to black magic restrictions, so you might as well write it without system, and now add restrictions (Guardian Charm) to restrict black magic (Fire Curse cannot be upgraded). You are writing a system article, and these restrictions are really unreadable.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 5d ago
Hard to comment
In order to save a stranger who was a foreigner whom he had never met before, and to convey the message, the protagonist chose the stupidest way, inflicted serious injuries on himself and went to the hospital. The Holy Mother shook her head when she saw it, and the author was so moved that it was purely a self-titled article.
Isn't the protagonist too lenient? At the age of five, he risked his life to lead a fake magic riot to seriously injure himself just for a Remus Lupin he had never met. Isn't this nonsense? How many saints must have such an idea, and are they not afraid of being suspected by Dumbledore?
No wonder this novel is free for members only
The author is a Dumbledore, and the character he wrote should be the kind of extremely disgusting character that is the subject of online conspiracy theories. Therefore, the protagonist looks like if he is even a little genius, others will check his brain, doubt him, supervise him, etc. Although the comments do not approve of it and think that the protagonist seems to be crazy. Then the protagonist is not yet 12 years old, and he has done many things, interfered with the fate of others, and was injured himself. He is in a state of confusion, and it feels like the protagonist is sick. There is a saying in the review that is very good. The protagonist should be directly injured and become a squib. Gaining and losing is the biggest punishment for a person. This is in line with the protagonist's mental illness.
Strong cheat (system type) + time travel, if you can't speed pass within 100 chapters (HP fan kills Voldemort with the middle finger), then it's either bad or poorly written. However, this did not happen during the original plot, so it must not be water. It can only be said that the author did not consider how powerful the script add-on is, which makes the level unreasonable, especially when the system is still so awesome from the factory. It is recommended that HP fan fiction not write a combination of system and time travel (knowing the script), otherwise the content will be very boring. Just choose one of the two at will and weaken one of them, and you can also write the process of the protagonist's decryption/growth. It is much better than the NT pseudo-invincible that uses the same system to intensify the current novels (it is obvious that it can be invincible, but it has to be carefully developed and has to follow the plot, especially the kind of SB that emphasizes that if you don't follow the plot, you will lose the advantage of the script). The writing is much better.
At the beginning, I was thinking about how to clear myself in front of Lao Deng. How dark is the protagonist?
This is my first time writing a book. If you have any comments, please leave them here.
First of all, thank you for your full support yesterday. It is really the first time that I have received so many monthly votes and recommendations. Then, if you want to be classmates with Regulus Black and Rita Skeeter, you can start drawing character cards.
Come on, come on, I feel like it's not enough
This is the first book for a newcomer. If you have any comments, please share it.
After all, this is a votive article. I want it to be as gentle and fulfilling as possible. I hope everyone will support me. Oh, by the way, Rita Skeeter and Regulus Black will enter school next year. If you want to be classmates with them, you can create character cards here. I will try to use them as much as possible😂
Is Dumbledore also going to become a man where magic is power?
If the Squib thing is successfully solved, then Dumbledore will also become a person who believes that magic is power, right? After all, Sirius cannot be cleared until death, which means that Dumbledore is not a person who believes that magic means power. All I can say is that it depends on how the author writes it. But there is one sentence that you can think about. If it is a purely refreshing article, pretend that I did not say it; if it is not a purely refreshing article, I just want to say that the world is inherently unfair and tragedies occur all the time.
It's all system-based and still subject to black magic restrictions, so you might as well write it without system, and now add restrictions (Guardian Charm) to restrict black magic (Fire Curse cannot be upgraded). You are writing a system article, and these restrictions are really unreadable.
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