Hogwarts Learning Panel

The poison was revealed at the beginning. The scholarship actually amounted to more than 300 galleons. At the beginning of the semester, more than 150 galleons were spent on purchases, and they said it was not enough. Prices have completely collapsed. What do you want the Weasley family to do? If they pay 50 Galleons a month to support so many children in school, wouldn't the whole family have to sell hooks? The author also plausibly posted various data to prove that this is reasonable. It is really magical to apply the prices of the Muggle world to the magical wizarding world. The purchasing power of galleons is very strong. Freshmen will only spend about 50 if they buy new ones. The poor ones will only need 20 or 30 second-hand items except for wands. You can get it to 150 in one go🤗 There are indeed unreasonable aspects in the original work, but other authors usually patch them up or ignore them. The way you write it is basically equivalent to overthrowing the original setting and starting over again. How are you going to round it out later? First of all, you must increase the salary of the Weasley family to at least a few hundred Galleons, otherwise the whole family will not be able to spend enough to sell hooks. The Weasley family's prize winnings must be changed. The 1,000 Galleons bonus for the Triwizard Tournament is too shabby and must be changed. Otherwise, if you finally win a big prize, it will be worth several years of tuition for a child, and you cannot even afford a ticket to travel to Egypt. It depends on how you write it later🤡If you follow your own ideas, you will be criticized. According to the original work, it contradicts the beginning and is still criticized.

It's boring to always force sensationalism. The protagonist is a time traveler, not a real child.

There is a problem with the portrayal of the protagonist. He just traveled through time and became a child, not a real child. The character, thoughts, and speech of the protagonist in the book are no different from those of a child, and he does not look like a modern adult at all.

The part before it was released felt pretty good, but after it was released, it was already 400,000 words long, and the first grade wasn't even over yet! ! ! There is a problem with this pacing, and there is a high probability that the plot will collapse later. Otherwise, why not write a h Harry Potter fanfic with more than 3 million words? It's understandable that the author wants to create some fairy tale-like warm friendship, but it's too watery if at least 100,000 of the 400,000 words are like this😐😐😐

Men's friendships are written like gays and prices are falling. Unfortunately, there are no good HP articles recently. I can resist these two points and I can barely read it.

After I looked at it for a while, I felt that it was just one sentence. "You become a child, but you are not a child."

It looks good now, but looking at the author's arrangement, it seems that Justin and Hermione are going to become a couple. I don't know whether the author arranged for the protagonist to have a female protagonist or not.

I'm giving this to someone I'm destined for. I'll reply after I receive it.

It was poisonous at the beginning, I don't know how the high score came about

I like this protagonist. There is no plot where he is always wary of the professor and Dumbledore or the Dark Lord intervenes in the plot. There is something about the protagonist's pursuit of knowledge. He is a very warm protagonist. Give it to those who are destined.