Hogwarts Learning Panel

The poison was revealed at the beginning. The scholarship actually amounted to more than 300 galleons. At the beginning of the semester, more than 150 galleons were spent on purchases, and they said it was not enough. Prices have completely collapsed. What do you want the Weasley family to do? If they pay 50 Galleons a month to support so many children in school, wouldn't the whole family have to sell hooks? The author also plausibly posted various data to prove that this is reasonable. It is really magical to apply the prices of the Muggle world to the magical wizarding world. The purchasing power of galleons is very strong. Freshmen will only spend about 50 if they buy new ones. The poor ones will only need 20 or 30 second-hand items except for wands. You can get it to 150 in one go🤗 There are indeed unreasonable aspects in the original work, but other authors usually patch them up or ignore them. The way you write it is basically equivalent to overthrowing the original setting and starting over again. How are you going to round it out later? First of all, you must increase the salary of the Weasley family to at least a few hundred Galleons, otherwise the whole family will not be able to spend enough to sell hooks. The Weasley family's prize winnings must be changed. The 1,000 Galleons bonus for the Triwizard Tournament is too shabby and must be changed. Otherwise, if you finally win a big prize, it will be worth several years of tuition for a child, and you cannot even afford a ticket to travel to Egypt. It depends on how you write it later🤡If you follow your own ideas, you will be criticized. According to the original work, it contradicts the beginning and is still criticized.

It's boring to always force sensationalism. The protagonist is a time traveler, not a real child.

There is a problem with the portrayal of the protagonist. He just traveled through time and became a child, not a real child. The character, thoughts, and speech of the protagonist in the book are no different from those of a child, and he does not look like a modern adult at all.

The part before it was released felt pretty good, but after it was released, it was already 400,000 words long, and the first grade wasn't even over yet! ! ! There is a problem with this pacing, and there is a high probability that the plot will collapse later. Otherwise, why not write a h Harry Potter fanfic with more than 3 million words? It's understandable that the author wants to create some fairy tale-like warm friendship, but it's too watery if at least 100,000 of the 400,000 words are like this😐😐😐

Men's friendships are written like gays and prices are falling. Unfortunately, there are no good HP articles recently. I can resist these two points and I can barely read it.

After I looked at it for a while, I felt that it was just one sentence. "You become a child, but you are not a child."

It looks good now, but looking at the author's arrangement, it seems that Justin and Hermione are going to become a couple. I don't know whether the author arranged for the protagonist to have a female protagonist or not.

Very very very good, this is the best Hogwarts fic for me. There are indeed a few small points that were not handled well at the beginning, but they get better as you go later. There are too many fan fictions in which the characters are very stereotyped. Most of the time-traveling protagonists are just for fun. The plot seems to be magnificent, but in fact it is bland and tasteless, and the aesthetic fatigue is serious. People are complex. If you can't dig deep into the character's inner being, discover other shining points, and give the character a soul, then you will just have seen it, without leaving any trace. Many people have forgotten that the reason why magic is mysterious and beautiful is that it comes from fairy tales. The Harry Potter series is a fairy tale, not a Western fantasy, so its core should be beautiful, just like the messy reality, and it does not hinder the most authentic pursuit of life, which is to live a long, happy and stable life. I saw several comments saying that it was too sensational, that the protagonist was too divine, and that it even went so far as to attack the author's gender. This is so strange. I don't know what they have encountered in reality. I'm sorry that they seem to no longer have expectations for beautiful qualities. The protagonist is certainly not perfect, but at least he is focused, gentle, grateful, and will cherish everything he has. Isn't this what adults who have experienced a lot have discovered that the world is not as good as they imagined, but they still learn to accept and love the world? On the contrary, the behavior of many time-travelers does not have the core of an adult. It is as if they have been given the skin of a child because of time-travelling, and they can do whatever they want. They are usually stressful, rebellious, do not have enough experience, and have low moral bottom lines (oh, I still find it hard to accept that an adult Young people can fall in love with 11 or 12-year-old children under the skin of a child. This is not puppy love, but a kidnapping!), These time traveler protagonists seem to serve them throughout the plot of the book, creating a lot of so-called character settings, but if you dig deeper, they are just empty shells without souls. I have always believed that novels are literary works with a low threshold, and they should also play an inspiring role. After so many years, the role of educating and reading has never been better jobs or money for the general public, but enlightening wisdom, which always allows people to think through words, become aware of themselves, and then grow. So why is it not worth sinking your heart to experience a work whose core is that even barren land can breed seeds that bloom beautiful flowers? The author's writing is very good. Of course, the protagonist also needs to grow up. At least he is suffering. Cherishing is not enough. He needs to learn to express love. Just like us, we should always learn to cherish everything we have, be grateful for the goodwill around us, and convey the goodwill to others. At least when death is imminent, you will not regret your whole life, so that your life, whether long or short, will not be in vain.

I'm giving this to someone I'm destined for. I'll reply after I receive it.

It was poisonous at the beginning, I don't know how the high score came about