The Old Lord of Hogwarts

Advantages: I didn't follow a group. The story is different from the original work except for the setting. It is relatively fresh. There is no entangled love story. The writing is quite good and the early stage is quite interesting. Disadvantages: The further you go, the more difficult it becomes. The protagonist is as stupid as a mentally retarded person, but he always manages to achieve his goals. Indeed, as the Sorting Hat said, it is not the protagonist who pursues knowledge, but the knowledge that voluntarily paves the way for the protagonist. Everything goes smoothly, and the foreshadowing is simply buried. It's terrible. You can guess from the beginning that most of the time is playing with time again. It's hinted at every turn that the protagonist is more awesome than Merlin. No, if the protagonist is more awesome than Merlin, whose legacy are you taking? Are you going to have a protagonist who plays with time and travels back to ancient times? Merlin is me? I can always write a foreshadowing for whatever I encounter to highlight the protagonist's awesomeness. The Dumbledore Summoning Spell in the introduction never appears at all. In short, it doesn't appear until the paid chapter. But I guess this thing will not appear a few times in the later period because it is useless. It is just a tool for Dumbledore to realize his dreams. , The whole story has no sense of crisis at all, Dumbledore's description is stronger, Grindelwald comes to Hogwarts to protect him, although the protagonist cannot defeat these two, he is more awesome, Voldemort is a clown, the protagonist has no opponents along the way, and all the troubles are not problems, but tests such as trials. A hearty battle? Sorry, no, it was all pretense and crushing, Voldemort was a fool and beat him up. Why are you hitting people when you have nothing to do? No, it's for others to see, to highlight the protagonist's awesomeness! Alas, no, what about finding a legitimate reason? Oh, of course, in order to absorb the energy of his remnant soul to strengthen himself, Did you suck it? Neither. Moreover, it was very subtle (crossed out) and clearly foreshadowed that there are probably hidden dangers in smoking this thing. I feel that I will not take a breath of this soul until the ending. Is this a cool article? Sorry, no, it was not pleasant to watch at all, especially when I was disgusted by some of the supporting characters. I really hoped that the protagonist would slap him at this time, but no, I just endured it without explaining, whatever you want to think. This Zao Ba makes me so angry. What did I see in Zao Ba? Summary: The story has no ups and downs, just a daily routine of playing house, and a fairy tale type of thinking and writing. It is a bit closer to the genius flow of Invincible flow, and it can pass the time with ordinary daily writing. Overall, it's a mediocre novel with no surprises. ----- I would like to add later that the review does not mean that the writing is poor. The main reason is that I didn't see anything mentioned in the introduction before the charging chapter, which made me angry. Many of them were just guesses. Because the hints in the text are too obvious, so I will complain about it. Just treat it as nonsense. The article is very good as a time-killing attribute, but I can't read it after reading too many novels like this.

There was a bit of ink at the beginning, with fifty chapters divided into chapters, but the daily life, interactions, and character creation were all good. Except it doesn't look like Harry Potter's worldview. But the latest chapter, starting from 270 to 280, has no progress at all. Yes, there is no progress at all. Just like the anime One Piece, one or two chapters were written about Snape's shock, disbelief, and random thoughts. The original protagonist group's disbelief, random thoughts, and shock were written in two or three chapters, and the protagonist's random thoughts, shock, and three or four chapters were written. I have finished writing the chapters in less than half a month (updated once a day). Either it was sold to a studio, it was ghostwritten, or the author Driftwood disappeared.

Chapter 50 is the first chapter. It's just too long-winded and has too many unappealing plot points. There is only so much foreshadowing for the plot, no matter how good the writing is, it is of no use.

Although the writing style is delicate, it is still watery. The male protagonist does not look like a college student at all. It can only be said that he has some kind actions. The characteristics of the characters are not specific enough, there are no outstanding points, and they feel very ordinary. The specific shaping needs to be looked at later, but it is too watery and drags on for too long, which consumes my enthusiasm for reading further. There is not a single attractive point, and it is more everyday. Some readers said that one chapter costs 50 points, and there are a lot of words, but I don't know how much actual content there is. This book remains to be seen.

It was okay at first, but as I wrote, it started to feel more and more wrong. Only around the 110th chapter, Ravenclaw was used as a mouthpiece to name the main character's true identity as the God of Death. There was no point in making such a high-profile character. Forget it, I have only written more than 200 chapters now, and it is already over 100 chapters ago. Even the protagonist group of the original work has not appeared. The identity of the protagonist is revealed so quickly, but the protagonist group has not appeared. Is this appropriate? It can be said that it is basically all original plots. If it is original, it is original. It has also changed many things that should have happened in the protagonist group and brought them up to now. It can be said that the basic interaction with the original characters only stays with Snape and Dumbledore, and there are very few interactions with other original characters. What is the point of interacting with the original background panel of Ravenclaw? The rest is basically written about original characters, and the original plot is not good-looking. Why read fanfics? Isn't it just to see the interaction between the protagonists and the original characters to bring new changes to the original plot? Why write fanfics when you have been putting aside writing about original characters? In fact, the book has already been sent from the point of positioning the protagonist's identity as the God of Death. It doesn't have the flavor of the original Harry Potter at all. Harry Potter is written as a fantasy novel, Magic. Professor Wen's book is a classic because it has the flavor of Harry Potter and does not violate the rules, so it is good to read. This book is just a fantasy novel in the skin of Harry Potter. Forget it, it barely interacts with the original characters. The original plot is not good to read. No matter how much writing is done later in the book, it will not solve the problem of the identity of the protagonist being the God of Death.

The protagonist is clearly a time traveler, but except for the first few chapters, he behaves like a child. The author doesn't think that such a funny plot that doesn't fit the character is really funny, right?

It's really water. The main character is like a garrulous person. His head is always full of random thoughts. Please give the author a word count. After reading it for a long time, there is nothing but water.

The plot is very imaginative. Not only does it jump out of the original plot, but the second setting is also very original. It can be regarded as a T0 level among fans. Regarding the character of the male protagonist, he is very childish, which is actually very unpleasant in other fics, but in this book, it is just right. On the one hand, it is the author's writing power, and on the other hand, the supporting characters (such as ggad) themselves are not uncomfortable. I also have suggestions for the next plot. In the second year of Harry's enrollment, it is fun to see the protagonist from Harry's perspective, but it can easily overwhelm the protagonist, so it is recommended to use Harry's perspective less, just like now.

I personally feel that the first-generation Demon King died, or was killed by Dumbledore. Why did he end up in prison in this novel? I checked the information and found that the first-generation Demon King died and was not imprisoned. If he was imprisoned, the second part should be written, but when I checked, he was dead and still popped out? ? ? I don't have much to say about the others at the moment. This is very different. I know that the author wants to make the world audience bigger, but people who cannot die are resurrected? ? ?

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