The Arcanist of Hogwarts

The comments from my account with the penguin avatar didn't appear. Do they need to be reviewed? I originally wanted to use that account to reward, but unfortunately that account didn't read coins, so I can use this account to reward. It's the same.

Now I am really looking forward to this novel, but I don't know if it will have no heroine. I really hope it will not have a heroine. Of course, it depends on how the author writes it. Personally, I prefer to have no heroine. Maybe there will be a heroine after me. . .

They are all pretty good. Most of the plot is basically focused on the story before Goblet of Fire. In the later stages, the plot becomes very rushed. It may be due to other reasons. I can only say that it is a pity.

Life and death, all I can think of now is this picture, does it look like a gene chain?

Is the protagonist like this or still like this when he grows up? 😘

There are some problems, but the main thing is that the dialogue and writing are too white and too dramatic. You can try writing British dialogue instead of dialogue like in urban fiction. Writing HP fan writing, especially dialogue, is really a very important module.

The early reading is quite good, and the plot connection in the middle is also okay, especially for the protagonist who grows up slowly. However, the ending is too hasty, and the overall word count is relatively small, which is not enough to read.