Elemental Wizard of Hogwarts

It feels like it was produced by a different author/studio 1 typo 2 reduce intelligence 3. Incorporating private goods. For example, the protagonist is obviously a childhood sweetheart with Hermione and is considered an official match. However, the words "Hermione and two useless men" always appear in the book. Readers often complained about it. However, I saw the summer vacation of the first grade and still didn't change it. I really don't want to read it anymore.

If you can accept the perfect degradation for more than ten years after rebirth and the protagonist's sudden mental shock, this is a good write-up.

Well, recently many book friends have been talking about the problem of typos. Indeed, once I have coded it, I rarely look back at the words I wrote. I only think about the plotヾ(Ő∀Ő3)ノ Therefore, I decided to sort out the outline in the next two days without affecting the update, and then look at the typos in the article. I apologize for the bad impact on readers. As a final reminder, I have time today, so I have saved my manuscript to the 23rd. The chapter to be published on the 23rd is something I have planned for a long time, and it is also my favorite chapter. Take your time with the bad taste.

Stepping on thunder 1, it is absolutely impossible to self-destruct without thinking just by changing the target when you are mentally prepared. Stepping on Thunder 2, it can obviously describe the magic more closely to the original work without affecting the plot, but it is still amazing if it is forced to come out in a state of control. In Thunderbolt 3, the dialogue is too immature and does not fit the character. How could Lao Deng describe Voldemort as a "stitch monster"? Very dramatic. It is neither original nor an interesting expansion.

Ever since I met Dumbledore, I have become wiser.

How should I put it? It feels like the protagonist has not only traveled through time, but also lost his IQ and dared to call him Lao Deng when meeting? Even in charity, you would be suspicious, right? After all, the original Lao Deng is a very controlling person and a top magician with a hundred years of life experience.

Is Slytherin's legacy so bad? What about the lifelong experience in spellcasting and the knowledge about magic that you promised to learn? Why do you feel that after receiving the inheritance, the protagonist has been wandering around and never studied magic seriously?

The plot, the original work was forcibly revised, and the protagonist's IQ is touching.

It's still good, but there are so many typos, which affects reading. I strongly recommend the author to read it again before posting, as it especially affects the sense of reading.

I am a remnant of the old era, the new era has no ship to carry me