Hogwarts Poisoned Egg

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It's not enough, please add more chapters! If there are not more than a few chapters, I will cry to you. Crystal Yan

It's a nice fanfic, quite heartwarming, but it's a bit unacceptable for the male protagonist to be in two different places. Regarding the later incident of Mrs. Granger asking Snape to treat the surrogate mother better, and many people hope that Snape and the surrogate mother will be together... I don't agree with it. After all, that woman was just invited to be a surrogate mother for IVF. Normal people wouldn't treat a surrogate mother like a wife, right? Moreover, that woman knew clearly that she was invited to be a surrogate mother, but she allowed others to misunderstand that the child was born to her and Snape, and allowed others to misunderstand that they had feelings for each other. Mrs. Granger always acted as if Snape had failed her surrogate mother. Although Snape finally accepted the woman, in fact, Snape didn't like the woman in the early stage, and the woman's self-love was really troubling. After all, they are in a relationship between the employer and the surrogate mother. They are neither husband and wife nor boyfriend and girlfriend. They don't even know each other. They really shouldn't kidnap them morally! After all, who in normal society would be responsible for a surrogate mother? This is just her job. It's her fault that she fell in love with her employer. How can she ask her employer to fall in love with her too? That is to say, Snape is not married. Normally, only couples seek surrogacy for in vitro fertilization. Is it necessary to destroy the relationship between husband and wife because of the surrogacy? How can this be true? !

After seeing Shen Teng's face, no matter how he looked at Snape, he would look the same.

This is a good book and highly recommended, but there are many things in it that could be further explored. It is a pity that I did not read it longer. The end of the book could have been longer, and the development and changes of the two women and other things were clearly explained. This made me very distressed. I wish the author a wonderful book! ! !

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Isn't this fucking pedophilia? Teenage girls are interested in children of several years old. Although the male protagonist has the soul of an adult in his body, I still find it disgusting🤢, and foreigners generally age quickly. Imagine that the male protagonist is in his youth and standing with someone who can be a fucking person emmmmm

I always feel that Elsa is dispensable and a little pitiful. She is always the one waiting for her. She met Egg earlier, but Hermione and Egger spent more time together, and Elsa and the circle of Egger's friends were incompatible. On the contrary, Hermione was more integrated into it, and the Granger family gave Egger a complete family, which was more meaningful. Elsa only has Egg, and the age gap between them is quite large. She doesn't quite understand the love between them, and it even feels ridiculous. Elsa's childhood longing for Egg who traveled back through time and space is just a kind of girlish ignorance, not very affectionate. This character is still too redundant and useless. It just highlights Egger's scumbag attributes.

But I feel like the egg tart has changed in taste after it appeared. Because he is an existence that looks like you but is not you. This is why many readers don't like the existence of clones. If your wife accidentally mistakes him for you. Tsk tsk tsk👿👿👿

After reading more than 40 chapters, I really can't stand the main character. He makes love to a teenage girl every day, and he also casually thinks about his elder sister. It's so obscene! I don't know how the rating is still 9.1!