The Days of Hanging Out at Hogwarts

The first three hundred or so chapters are quite good, warm and beautiful, with increasing strength, love and friendship, and I really like the author's creation. It started after 400 chapters. No matter how fast and powerful Loren improved, he had to follow the 7 plot lines, and the people who deserved to be hurt were still hurt. The purpose of reading fan fiction was to make up for some disagreements, and there was such a big variable as the protagonist. When the plot point was reached, the positive side was trying to outsmart the negative side, and the other side was ignoring it. I couldn't stand it and gave up.

Overall pretty good. But the romance aspect is too heavy, and it feels like Hermione is almost becoming the protagonist. And Hermione is so OOC that I really can't stand it anymore.

This is probably the worst novel I have ever read with a protagonist. He is completely invisible every time he fights. Author, you have to make him stand out. Those eyes are obviously a very good talent, but they feel like they are being wasted and of little use...

I felt like my score was too high. I went back in time and my parents died in front of me, but I forgot that I was only one year old and had no feelings at all. So what is the purpose of this plot arrangement? It's okay to just arrange to have both parents die in an orphanage, and then arrange a murderer in the orphanage. There is no beginning or end. So this murderer is a wizard? There will be a role for him later, maybe it's foreshadowing, but it's quite baffling.

The emotional line is very well written, but it's a pity that the title of the book is too confusing😄

I can't see any changes to the plot. I can kill people like Barty Jr., I can kill them many times, and I take them back to Dumbledore. Why does this thing get 8 points? It's rubbish. Not to mention Malfoy and the like, villains like Bella Barty are not decisive in killing. The author has something going on at home. His mother was toyed with by the Death Eaters, and then the author said to leave it to Dumbledore.

To be honest, I know that the author's writing skills are not enough, but it is not as good as the Riddler. It is really disgusting. There is also the continuity of the plot. I want to make up for the result and the subsequent process. It was very uncomfortable to watch. The most disgusting thing was that some chapters were too jumpy. Some climaxes were skipped directly without going into details. There are so many of them that if it weren't for the book shortage, I wouldn't be able to read them. The plot is too dull. Isn't it true that watching Harry Potter is all about magic and alchemy? What's the point of learning alchemy in it for so long? I just made a storage unit, and then, is there any innovation? Is it all about falling in love with the heroine? After practicing magic spells for so long, fighting is still a chore. The self-made magic spells at the beginning were quite innovative. But now, in fact, they have almost finished learning them in the third grade, and they have not even studied them? If it weren't for the forcible cheating to increase the magic power, Voldemort might not be resurrected, right? There are also problems with the character design of the protagonist. The setting given is so vast, I only felt a little harmonious in the patch of ancient magic immortality given. I was dumbfounded and didn't see the goals and ideals. I thought it was going to be Dumbledore's ending, suppressing the magic world, and then when it reached 500, it had neither strength nor results. As a result, the protagonist is set as a person destined to reform, and I don't see any ideas. She has always said she is afraid of trouble and has been actively participating in the plot. If you are really afraid, just don't do it, the outcome is doomed. Pure water At present, it's all about daily life, which takes up a large part. I'm also letting Hermione fall in love, so forget it. There are still problems with the plot advancement.

Many people's names are wrong. When Hedwig joined Hathaway, I felt that the author didn't understand Harry Potter and was just riding on the popularity.

I didn't see revenge, so why did you write this plot?

Please ask, will Pettigrew be killed or Sirius added later, or will you forgive them?