I Have a Yandere Girlfriend

It's been half a year since the last update. If you won't write, I will.

I'm heartbroken; my novel is probably going to sink again.

I was completely speechless watching this. They wouldn't accept something for nothing, treating him like a dog, even fawning over him. I don't even know how to express myself. Having read novels for ten years, this is the first time I've ever read something like this, I don't even know how to criticize it. It's truly beyond ridiculous. They portray the male lead as both cowardly and weak. Fawning over someone is one thing, but this fawning is just unbelievable. Being treated like this by a woman, yet still fawning over her so obsessively—I really don't know what he's thinking. I'm wondering, if you were in this situation, could you accept it? I originally came for the yandere trope, but this is just unbelievable. I can't bear to watch it. Of course, this is just my personal feeling, but that's how I feel.

This is too much of a simp! I came for the yandere trope, and then they added this simp-like character? I really don't like it. I can't stand it. If anyone likes it, it's just a minority. Who in reality would like this kind of character? My type is so different from this. If anyone likes it, I'll take a look, but I doubt many will. I like the "feel-good" type of story. A yandere is so much better, why add a simp? Seriously...

I originally came for a yandere story, but I discovered the female lead isn't yandere; the second female lead is. The title needs to be changed. The male lead's behavior is incredibly cowardly. He has a second female lead, doesn't like her, and doesn't dare to boldly confess his feelings, letting her love him unconditionally. I can understand him confessing again after being rejected, but going to discuss deconstructing a love expert with a second-year student? A second-year student is only seven or eight years old. Even if she's precocious, she shouldn't know this much. It's a light novel, but this is absurd and makes me feel strange and uncomfortable. The male lead's behavior isn't just cowardly, it lacks even the courage to confess...

All drafts have been sent. Thank you everyone. One thing I'd like to add is... The ending is that he ends up with Xia Zhiye. He can't let such a good girl down. I simply don't have the ability to finish this story. If I do, please continue it; I would be very grateful. Thankfully, it wasn't published, so at least readers won't complain that they paid money only to read a pile of garbage. In short, there is still a long way to go.

The author has been absent for years; I've already finished junior high and am almost ready for the college entrance exam in high school. I hope I'll see it finished in my lifetime. "Too much, too much, too much!" "Terrible, terrible, terrible!" "Rotten person, terrible person, terrible person!" "Go, go die, go die!" (▼ Plate▼#)

It's been a while since my last update, so here's a quick update.

The story initially mentions the male and female leads saving the yandere second female lead, then suddenly two years later, many unnamed female supporting characters appear. In chapter 26, the second female lead is forcibly framed as an accomplice to a murderer, and what is that thing only she can see? In the final chapter of that part, the male lead should meet the female lead in the bathhouse, right? Why does the next part, in the first chapter, suddenly jump to Anlis? Who is this person? Is he the male lead's brother? What does this mean? The plot jumps too fast; I can't process it. This doesn't seem like a (dual storyline) structure (what happened to the promised romance harem? Why is there a sci-fi element?). The timeline...

Actually, the beginning is quite good and engaging. However, the later plot developments fall apart a bit. After finishing, I checked the novel's title, and it doesn't match up... Writing about yandere characters is fine, but it needs to be done at a very high level. The author seems to have strayed a bit, but at least they managed to pull it back together, so it's still not bad. Personally, I feel the plot is pretty much set in stone, because the male lead's character has already been established, and the story's overall appeal has been affected by this. I doubt any further digressions can significantly improve the story's overall interest in a short time. Of course, the author's skill level is still quite high...