Could You Please Not Treat Me Like This?

[Light Novel Review] Commentator: Shi Ri Hello everyone, I'm Shi Ri. Nice to meet you all. As is customary, let me start with a self-introduction. Those who know me probably already know what I am, and for those who don't, just remember this initial impression—"Shi Ri is a pseudo-academic who appears boisterous on the outside but is actually very composed on the inside." Before we begin the review, let me add a few more words. Although I consider myself an academic, my knowledge and experience are ultimately insufficient, and book reviews are inherently subjective. If I say anything incorrect or offend anyone, please don't come after me; I'm quite sensitive. Okay, let's begin...

I think you, author, could infuse more emotion into your writing, not just expressing your own feelings, but putting yourself in the protagonist's shoes and presenting your innermost thoughts through your writing. Perhaps in other people's stories you're just a supporting character, but in your own, you must be the protagonist. Author, you can read more heartbreaking and moving stories, but when you do, don't just read; immerse yourself in the story and feel the emotions within. You can also use your imagination to enhance the parts you like. Personally, when I read sad parts, I imagine myself in that character's shoes, trying to understand...

Author, I'm still following your story. I think you should add more romance elements to make it more varied and interesting (actually, I just like romance stories). Also, don't over-dramatize the everyday life elements; just let it flow naturally. Combining action, romance, and… I recommend a book, though it's not on this website, but you can look it up. It's worth reading and still being serialized. The title is "My Goddess Wife Fell in Love with Me".

Yes, I'm really sorry for leaving it untouched for so long. In the new year, I will respond to all of you who love this book.

I really enjoyed the beginning of the story; it was lighthearted and comfortable to read. Aside from some of the slightly precocious plot points, it was quite interesting. However, the sudden breakup in the middle caught me off guard, but I still kept reading. Then the pacing became so fast it was overwhelming, the contrast was too great, and the final chapter was too depressing and abrupt. The twist was so sudden that I personally couldn't quite understand it. I really like the character Huang Xin; she's a wonderful character. Anyway, I'll continue reading and hope the author keeps up the good work!

Why are these two chapters exactly the same? Even filler chapters are rarely this filler.

Dear author, I'm back! The subsequent plot is fantastic. The protagonist's experiences reminded me of Clannad. The time jumps are significant, but very engaging, and the characters' inner thoughts are well-developed. Personally, I think adding some inner thoughts about the protagonist after leaving his daughter, perhaps as a side story, would be great. Ye Xinyu calling him "Daddy" so often is so heartwarming. Also, adding some inner thoughts about her after Ye Ye leaves, as she matures a bit, and how she rekindles her relationship with Ye Ye and their enduring parental bond would be wonderful! That would be fantastic! Overall, that's all. Keep up the good work, author! I'll definitely keep following...

Digging graves

When will you come back?

When will the author come back?