It's Over, I'm Surrounded by Yandere Girls!

Fully recovered, updates will resume Monday.

The male lead's pig-nose gesture has been repeated far too often. The process of elimination is used repeatedly, eliminating the wrong answer first. Can we please stop showing the same plot so often? It makes the male lead seem like he hasn't grown at all.

It was truly touching to finally see Suzuki Hikaru meet the protagonist. However, the author seemed to be getting carried away, giving Asuka so much screen time for no apparent reason; it was completely pointless. It would have been so much better if this part had been shortened. I still prefer watching the male lead.

This book is a masterpiece, but unfortunately, the updates are not very stable.

This is exactly the 300th review, and overall I'd give it a good rating. While using a visual novel setting isn't uncommon, the combination of romance, slice-of-life, and suspense elements always makes it captivating. The writing is accessible and flows fairly smoothly (though I'd prefer less paragraphing for the characters' dialogue, as it sometimes distracts me from debating whether it's an inner monologue or spoken words). Also, I have some questions; with a million words, shouldn't it have over 10,000 favorites? Perhaps the pacing is a bit slow? The author's detailed outline is commendable, but I have a vague feeling that sometimes, to serve a particular exciting plot point, the logic and character...

Having followed this series for so long, what struck me most was the vividly portrayed personalities of the female leads. The tension during the climax of the third playthrough, when the male lead assassinates the father of the female lead, was particularly well-done, which was a good point. However, I felt that the portrayal of Asuka's oppressive nature could have been expanded upon. After all, her brutality was already revealed when she was shot in the second playthrough of the main story, so there was no need to be so secretive later on. This could be achieved through her confessions, habitual actions, and judgments.

Did you win the revival match?

I'm coding now, I'm coding now.

I've written 1.17 Million words, and I still don't know why Hasegawa Asuka likes the male protagonist. I'll just leave it at that.

Lao Fan has become a monthly author.