The Sword Immortal Senior Disciple Is Going to Slack Off to His Heart's Content Today

This book is pretty bad. The main characters all have this "literary chauvinism" syndrome, and the female lead is obsessed with him, saying she doesn't want him but her actions betray her—it's hypocritical. She's like a tool, frantically throwing herself at the protagonist. They only remembered the Empress of Zhongzhou hadn't taken her in at the very end, and then immediately removed her in two chapters, regardless of whether the plot made sense. Was that necessary? When someone offered a suggestion, the author personally attacked them, saying, "Are you telling me how to do things?" An author who writes light novels for money is actually questioning and exploiting readers' right to speak—it's unbelievable!

Let's just look at the male protagonist. His appearance is unknown, not described in much detail. After reading the first volume, his face is still a pixelated image in my mind. His personality is unclear. He grew up in the Demon Sect. When the Demon Clan was wiped out, he didn't seem to care much. The Grand Elder of the Demon Sect risked his life to help him escape. Luo Yesheng killed the Grand Elder and took him in. He felt indebted to her, which left me speechless. After his inner core was taken, the premise was that he would give up, but he's constantly showing off, and deliberately so. He never avoids suspicion, and after admitting defeat once at the beginning, he argues with everyone he meets. He's completely unfriendly to women...

This section is really poorly handled. It's not that the logic is flawed, but the writing itself is. The author's thoughts are put into words, then read by the reader, and finally understood by the reader. No matter how well you plan, if the reader can't understand it, it's useless and even annoying. A large amount of space is devoted to describing the Flower Sect Leader's thoughts, leading the reader to interpret the little fox from the Flower Sect Leader's perspective. It's fine to highlight the Flower Sect Leader's personality, but you should leave some room for the little fox to explain herself. Look at those chapters; they're all about the Flower Sect Leader's view of the little fox. You're writing about the Flower Sect Leader's possessiveness, and the space is all devoted to the Flower Sect Leader. There's hardly any space for the little fox's true personality and thoughts, naturally creating a reader...

I'll take a day off if nothing unexpected happens.

I started reading this book on another app. My habit is to read novels on another app first, and if I find a really exciting part, I'll subscribe to the entire book on the original website – it's just a personal habit. The beginning was indeed very good; I even started reading late at night and stayed up until 4 or 5 AM. But tonight, the chapter about Hua Yueyou and Su Zizhi really disgusted me. However, there's no doubt that the beginning was excellent. I downloaded Pineapple Bun late at night and came here to subscribe to the entire book, but I'm abandoning it – consider it a wasted effort. That chapter was really upsetting. This book is arguably the best and most enjoyable harem novel I've read in recent months, but being disgusted by it like that is just...

I just realized that He Xue's master, junior brother, and senior brother all received awards. No wonder it's a trilogy!

Although He Xue offered an explanation later, I still want to point it out. The palace intrigue scene in the Western Regions arc where Su Zizhi and Hua Yueyou first meet is illogical. The male lead's handling of the situation is like a parent protecting the youngest child. He Xue repeatedly says love is equal, but Su and Hua are clearly biased and indefensible. Su Zizhi is sarcastic towards Hua Yueyou, flaunts jewelry bought with Hua Yueyou's money, and colludes with her best friend to ostracize Hua Yueyou. Isn't it understandable that Hua Yueyou gets angry? And Gu Yuan doesn't even bother to explain or comfort her. When Hua Yueyou finally snaps back, Su Zizhi, unable to tolerate it any longer, goes to complain, and when she returns, the two of them...

Has anyone counted how many female protagonists there are in all the completed series?

Would you believe me if I said I only spent one dollar, signed up for almost 20 months, and used free tokens to almost finish subscribing to this book?

One of Xue's books is enough; the differences between her books are too small.