Becoming a Witch in an Otherworld Game

I've finally found the time to share my thoughts on this "new work," which is less than 500,000 words long. In my opinion, this book is a top-tier online game novel, standing out among a sea of ​​immersive VR games. In fact, for the vast majority of online novels, the author's goal is simply to write an interesting story, and the reader's goal is to read an interesting story. There's nothing wrong with that; everyone gets what they want. However, in my relatively short reading career, there are a very few books that give me the feeling of "an artist treating their art." Since the beginning of this book, its world-building has expanded at an astonishing pace: the Flying Bird Society, supernatural arts...

I initially came across this book because of the "transformation" plot, but what kept me hooked was its subject matter. Having finished reading *Mysterious*, finding this book by Pineapple Bun was a delightful surprise. To summarize, the writing is smooth, error-free, and easy to read. The characters are logical, and the main plot unfolds clearly. Furthermore, the descriptions of deities, props, and scenes are sophisticated and not awkward, which is quite impressive. I've seen many books of the same genre fail in this regard. The fight scenes are well-thought-out, and most importantly, the protagonist's transformation is exceptionally well-executed—a perfect execution for a "transformation" novel. Having praised it enough, let's move on to...

It's worth mentioning here that it's best not to set the condition for the evolution of the original texts as devouring other original texts; simply browsing or copying them would suffice. Devouring original texts is fundamentally different from browsing them. If it were set as devouring original texts, it would be a method that threatens the very foundation of major powers, requiring a very subtle depiction of the human nature involved—a task far too difficult and demanding too much detail. Writing the process of cunning acquisition without being superficial is challenging enough, let alone acquiring all the original texts, which involves more than just one or two. How to write about each of those texts with distinct characteristics is even more difficult. If the later stages become too drawn out, and the writer runs out of ideas, then finding an excuse to speed up the collection process would be even worse…

Author: Once a person abandons their post, there's no censorship above; no readers to bother below. No worries of the seasons, no sweltering summers, no freezing winters. Peace and comfort, spring all year round, like paradise. Even a king couldn't compare. If I asked the god of writing to restore your updates, rewrite your outline, and send you back to your readers, would you be willing? The author frowned, deeply worried, and said, "How can I abandon the joy surpassing even that of a king, and once again endure the toil of writing?" The plot inevitably changes at the points where revisions are made; the original plot evolved with the revisions. Subsequent continuations lacked...

World Tree... Yggdrasil, welcome, outsider. Mephisto (Player) Overall Level lv22 Faction: Chaos. Good Race: Terra Human (Twilight Race) Real Name: Lewin Likes: Sister Dislikes: Unnecessary things Panel: [HP 100%] [Mana 90/90] Lineage: Radiant Lineage - Path of Light - Stage 2 - Candle Holder lv11 Twilight Lineage - Path of the End - Stage 2 - End Reciter lv11 Abilities: Elegy of Paradise lv1: [Twilight - Spells] ...

I don't know why, but I feel like the female lead is becoming more and more human.

I feel this book is more like a road trip novel than a fast-paced, action-packed story. The author often prioritizes their own expressive desires, slowing down the main plot while expanding the world-building expans significantly; it pads out parts lacking in exciting moments (like the trials and tribulations, the advancement experiences). Reading this book felt more like traveling with Li Wen in another world.

The main character is breathing again, so cute! It feels like Victoria understands Lewin's user manual better than Moria does.

It's really good, but the updates are incredibly slow. This is the kind of work that makes you imagine how satisfying it would be to finish reading it all in one go after it's finished 😭

Reading progress: Chapter 95. Let's start with the good points. The complete ritual process, the natural otherworldly proverbs, the names of objects, the rich world-building, and the strong sense of immersion make it feel like the author is writing about their own inner world. The elements of marriage and fatalism are what drew me in. However, the character development seems incomplete. Why do some readers find Li Wen cold? Looking back at Li Wen's encounter with the Reagans and their enthusiastic help upon entering the game, the only description of her feeling is: "A little touched." This is a very vague feeling. More importantly, it doesn't mention how Li Wen views the NPCs of this other world. When Li Wen learns of the Reagans' tragic death, it seems to describe her...