In her previous life, Ke Jiu was killed after losing a duel with her sworn enemy. Then she was reborn.
That should have been a good thing, but somehow her gender had been "reborn" along with her.
Furious, Ke Jiu flew to the hometown where her sworn enemy was born, intending to find him and finish him off with a single sword strike.
But she couldn't find her enemy. Instead, she came back with a disciple.
Ten years later, she discovered that the disciple she'd taken was her sworn enemy from her previous life, but by then it was too late.
Backed into a corner of the bed, Ke Jiu put on a tough front despite her fear.
"You insolent traitor! What do you think you're doing to your master?"
The traitorous disciple smiled. "Master, all you've got left now is a sharp tongue."
A fledgling but promising debut work.
Reaching over 3,000 favorites upon publication is already quite impressive, exceeding my expectations. The author's writing style is very strong, and they possess a solid ability to write long stories. However, like every novice writer, they make the same mistake of feeling overwhelmed and lost: inappropriate emphasis. New writers want to control the plot but often miss the point (even experienced writers struggle with this, just with more experience). How do you determine which parts should be elaborated on? Conflict is crucial in novels; the writing should revolve around it, focusing more on the current conflict and providing ample information related to it, while omitting unnecessary details...
I want to be lazy today, so I'm taking a day off.
The author took a day off for Children's Day.
Keep it up, I believe in you!
Why is the little girl paired with the main character? What's the point of this kind of story without explicit content? Why force a master-disciple relationship between a senior and junior disciple? And why does the protagonist's personality become so childish after practicing reincarnation techniques? All the charm of a master-disciple story is gone!
Hao Kan, Su Geng, unable to sleep at night
The plot dragged on too much at the beginning, and they still want to finish it in 800,000 words? Many supporting characters' storylines are completely unimportant and unnecessary, making me hesitant about whether to continue watching.
The author got confused while playing with the black monkey and posted the wrong chapter of the new book. The chapter will be replaced tomorrow. (No expression)
I'll update another chapter 😭
I was so angry I laughed. Dude, I didn't even realize it.