I'm the Only Undead Player at Game Launch

First of all, please don't criticize my work too harshly. The author isn't forcing you to accept my opinions; if you find them reasonable, then improve upon them. Otherwise, consider it a book review to boost your popularity. Strengths: As a light novel, the plot is quite good, and the character development is also good. However, if you only want to be a writer of mindless light novels, then you don't need to read further. First, as a literary work, necessary environmental descriptions and character development are very important, and after reading for so long, I feel that this aspect is lacking. For example, the lack of environmental description makes each battle feel abrupt. Secondly, it would be better if each character had a distinct name...

First, the subject matter. The Undead player theme really appealed to me; when I played Warcraft, Undead were indeed weak, so this felt like a happy ending. The connection between the game world and real life was also quite interesting. It's a shame. As readers continue reading, they'll discover problems with the outline. For example, the protagonist's friend, the cross-dressing ice cream vendor, and the shameless relatives—especially in a family that favors sons over daughters—could have been shining moments if written well, but the plot abruptly ends. It's like you're happily going skydiving, you've already jumped, and you realize you're carrying not a parachute, but a backpack full of tooth-splitting saccharin, and a cheap, off-brand one at that...

Sand God dominates the market, becoming a bestseller and unrivaled.

Illness strikes suddenly and I need to rest for a few days. Please forgive me.

I saw it on Bilibili... I clicked in and it turned out to be from SF, so I quickly found it.

Since I've only read up to chapter 39 so far, I'll only be reviewing chapters 1-39. Also, for some reason, there were gaps in the story while I was reading; it suddenly jumped to other plot points out of nowhere. However, the plot itself is still predictable. Let's start with the shortcomings. "Ordinary" is my first impression of the novel. Because the plot is similar to some games, anime, and novels, I won't elaborate further. The plot is systematically conventional, with basically nothing unexpected. There's too little description of other NPCs' stories and details, the narration feels forced, and the character development is also problematic. My current impression of the protagonist...

Every family has its own problems, and I think the realistic storyline involving the ice cream character could easily be ruined. From the very beginning, when the younger brother was mentioned, I suspected it might be the kind of family where the whole family favors sons and takes advantage of the older sister. After just a few chapters, the author confirmed my guess (at least that's how it seems to me). Let me repeat, this kind of plot is difficult to write. First, the ice cream character will definitely have to suffer some kind of blow (the severity is hard to say), then Tokisaki will intervene or offer some words of comfort, and finally, the ice cream character will either make a choice or be freed. However, the key is that this process is difficult to write. It's like an unsolvable choice between your girlfriend and your mother falling into the water at the same time; the only answers are either no answer, or your mother can swim, or your girlfriend...

Sigh, back when it was 120,000 words long, I followed it relentlessly, but it wasn't very popular. When it started charging for content, its popularity increased, but at the same time, I couldn't read it anymore.

Anyone who dares to provoke the Sand God will die.

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