That's Right! This Wicked Witch Did It All!

Hello everyone, this is Chuqing, who never stirs up trouble. To sum it up first, this book is extremely versatile, offers excellent strategic depth, and is incredibly challenging. (Gets dragged away) The writing is truly superb; it's an incredibly smooth read, the pacing is excellent, and the characters aren't just simple stereotypes—each has their own unique strengths. And most importantly, it's incredibly interesting; so far, not a single chapter is wasted. I'm really looking forward to the author's future developments :)

The most crucial point about Wan Tian is his strength, which is extremely mismatched with Xiao Qiu's. However, it's clear that Wan Tian can't quickly improve his strength; his talent is average. This creates a problem with the plot: Xiao Qiu can't go to low-ranked matches with Wan Tian to smurf, and Wan Tian himself can't play high-ranked matches. The author's solution is the equipment: the Relic Stone and the Dao Cliff Sword. But again, his own strength is insufficient; he can't fight a prolonged battle and can only rely on bursts of power. So the plot becomes: others fight for a long time, then the situation turns bad, and the protagonist arrives with divine weapons, defeating the enemy. Here's the most crucial point: all the damage is dealt by the divine weapons, and the protagonist's only...

Personally, placing a summary at the end of the volume in the table of contents was a disastrous jarring experience. Especially since the author deconstructed their own writing process, it completely pulled me out of the story at the end of Volume Two, making it difficult to return. This is a real shame for me. The preceding content was excellent, flowing smoothly and naturally drawing me into the story, allowing me to move and develop alongside it. The well-written narrator should have simply focused on being a storyteller; foreshadowing, suspense, and setting should have been left for the reader to discover, rather than dissecting the plot and giving a report-like explanation of the writing process. This left the reader still somewhat...

The pacing is incredibly slow, and each chapter feels like it's being squeezed out piecemeal, lacking the rhythm of the earlier volumes. Each chapter also contains very little information, making the entire volume feel like scattered sand. The chapters on Hengkong Temple are all rather nonsensical, requiring explanations later. Stop with the piecemeal approach and clearly present the exciting moments and plot twists. Right now, it feels like chewing gum that's already lost its flavor.

I'm taking a day off. To wrap up this volume and based on feedback from readers, I need to make some minor changes to the already written plot. Since the update schedule is already notoriously unpredictable, I'll have to postpone it until tomorrow. I apologize for that. P. S.: Thank you weiminggj for the donation, the author is flattered.

I absolutely love this novel; it's like my dream love letter. But even a dream love letter has its shortcomings. I saw it several times but didn't open it, almost regretting it for the rest of my life, all because of the "transformation" tag. The question of gender has existed since ancient times, but because there's still no way to change gender without any side effects, the division between men and women remains crystal clear: it's based on your sex at birth, not on your personal self-identification. Personally, I believe that people are not aware of their own gender at birth, and no one demands that an infant adhere to any particular gender-specific rules...

I'm begging you, please get Qiuqiu to the third realm already! This book is nearing its end, and there's clearly a thirteenth realm to reach, yet the protagonist is still stuck in the previous version. The writing was already chaotic; your strength isn't in the ensemble cast, but in using indirect characterization to highlight the protagonist. The current pacing makes it feel like even the Demon Lord is forced to do nothing while waiting for Xun Qiu. And then there are a bunch of unfinished side quests—the Evil Immortal, the Witch-Eyed Demon Lord—all waiting there.

I'm taking a day off. I've been having some writer's block lately, and I think it's best to think things through carefully before deciding between writing a long chapter and forcing myself to update. I'll try my best to finish this chapter tomorrow morning.

The Demon Lord is like the mysterious Amon.

The writing is getting increasingly chaotic; the author seems to be writing whatever comes to mind, the battles are a mess, and various settings are randomly added. In the world of the Upper Three Realms, the male and female leads are basically just background characters.