The Mute Demon-Slaying Girl Only Wants Her Scummy Senior Brother to Love Her Forever

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To be honest, the writing is good. It's just—and this might just be my personal opinion—that the author's trope is a bit off-putting. When the male or female lead gets to a crucial point or realizes the most important detail, they either stop saying "no time to think," or "too tired to sleep," or get interrupted by something else. It seems like this is just to drag out the plot, and I don't think this trope is very good.

I read over fifty chapters in one go and there wasn't a single exciting moment; it was all just riddles. What a load of nonsense!

Seeing the king's guillotine in chapter 174 felt like a suffocating feeling, followed by being force-fed a huge dose of something superfluous. Before chapter 174, Snowball basically had no highlights. After hiding those two purification potions for so long, I thought they were going to unleash their full potential and have a moment of glory, but the male lead just consumed them, and then he just calmly dealt with everything. He was basically just a pretty face with no screen time whatsoever.

Yueyue is right.

The pacing is too slow, and it's the kind of slowness that wastes breath on meaningless parts. The characters aren't particularly interesting either. My interest waned as soon as I came in because of the title and synopsis. Honestly, even authors who pad their word counts can keep their chapters somewhat engaging, but this is just utterly devoid of any excitement.

Xia Yin: Snowball, once you finish sweeping, I'll shovel you to death!

It was exhausting to watch from the very beginning. The plot, which was supposed to be a smooth sequence of events—the heroine transforming after the incident and going to school—was inexplicably interrupted by a slice-of-life scene that dragged out the pace. A bunch of concepts were introduced without explanation, and by chapter 12 we still didn't know the heroine's abilities. Then, she'd suddenly unlock a new map halfway through her school trip, making the pacing inexplicably fragmented.

In my eyes, "drama," "coming-of-age," "campus setting," and "pure love" are the labels for this book. Xueqiu is an awkward, tenacious, and pitiful child; I see a reflection of myself in her. Xia Yin is a talkative but reliable senior who is never absent when Xueqiu needs him. I hope that every character in the book can get their own ideal ending.

This female lead is so slow and awkward. She's dull, clumsy, and always overthinking. At 300,000 words, she's still aimless and confused. Xia Yin feels like a doting father watching his slow learner, only able to sigh and continue caring for him… Although everyone says this book has a strong dragon theme, Xue Qiu's treatment is much better than Xiao Lu's. Xiao Lu doesn't even share a dorm with her senior sister and is constantly protected and cared for by her… Honestly, is Xue Qiu really not a father figure? I feel like Xia Yin is practically Xue Qiu's second parent. Now, her former brother's identity is about to be revealed (?), Which will be another huge shock to Xue Qiu's pre-transformation life experiences. I hope Xue Qiu…