Reborn as a Phoenix, I'm Raising a Child

The following chapters completely shattered my moral compass. I initially thought the author would build a romantic foundation for a smoother transition, but instead, you resorted to rape. Based on the previous chapters, the male lead should have known the female lead's alcohol tolerance and what a drunken state she was in. Here, you offer a flimsy excuse that you didn't know she was drunk. Besides, the male lead wasn't even drunk; even if he was, being incoherent shouldn't be used as an excuse. Taking advantage of her drunkenness and impaired consciousness to confess his feelings, and then having sex with her—what is that if not rape? Of course, the author can interpret the story however they want, but based on my understanding of society...

There's no traitor in this book. At one point, I suspected it was a yuri story... In fact, the author does directly depict yuri... This made me, a person with OCD, feel very uncomfortable. For example, the little wolf's heat cycle. Although I only read selectively, I felt the male lead was a bit unfair to the female lead because I didn't empathize with her... It's borderline (especially since this is a bit too much, even going through a heat cycle, do you think it's a beaver? I feel like my OCD is acting up if I marry a yuri character). I think a warning should be given at the end, instead of using marriage as a pretext to do yuri underneath.

This is a book I've been reading for quite a while… I started around the end of 2019, and I read all the chapters in one go. I'd like to share my thoughts. I'm a little disappointed by the chaotic comments section, because I feel like they haven't truly immersed themselves in the book. From the first contract with the vampire Nana Lu, you can see the author's extremely delicate portrayal of the characters' psychology, from the initial simple exchange of interests to the master-servant relationship, and then gradually transitioning to friendship. If you don't read carefully, you won't really feel it. The joy of defeating a powerful enemy, the growing friendship…

It's not bad, but the problems are obvious. The entire story feels rushed and unplanned, with too many repetitive and contrived plot points. It's essentially the same old formula, leading to reader fatigue after a while. What's the biggest advantage of isekai (another world) novels? It's the experience readers get that they can't have in their daily lives! That's the novelty that's what's needed. The author could have focused more on daily life and side stories, interactions with students, and adventures. They could have explored the culture and life of the other world, included travel scenes, introduced the world, and expanded the setting to immerse the reader in a vast historical context. Instead...

Resuming updates

Huh? I thought at the current update pace, it would be another two or three years before ending, like Abyss, which was at least 3 million words long. I didn't expect it to end this year. I originally thought that even if the new book ended, this one wouldn't, but I didn't expect... After all, this is my first book, and also the one that got me into the Transformation series and Pineapple Bun, so I'm really a little reluctant to let it go.

I got stuck on chapter 356 and couldn't continue, mainly for two reasons: 1. What initially attracted me was the premise of the protagonist becoming a wife and raising a child. I was actually quite looking forward to seeing the protagonist's psychological transformation from man to wife, but so far, it seems the protagonist accepted the change almost without hesitation. In short, I personally feel the psychological shift was too rapid. It would have been better if the author had described the emotional changes in more detail. 2. The protagonist's drunken encounter with the male lead was too sudden, with little foreshadowing in the preceding text. Afterwards, he simply moved into his own home, and that was it. I didn't sense any emotional fluctuation in the protagonist...

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As the title suggests, I listened to the end of the second chapter, and the plot urged me to continue, but the writing style was discouraging me. The storyline is good, but the narration is somewhat verbose. It feels like the author wrote whatever came to mind, with many incoherent parts. My personal suggestion is to list out the important settings separately for easy reference while writing. Secondly, after finishing an episode or part of the story, read it through to see if it flows smoothly and if there are any areas for improvement. Also, I have to complain that the background music in the audio version is too distracting. It would be more comfortable without it.

The book I saw 21 years ago is still being serialized 24 years ago.