Wild Goose Dew Formation

My books don't start with conflict; they take time, alternating between sweet and angsty moments to achieve a balanced experience. The general idea is something like this: Sweet ~ Slightly angsty ~ Very sweet ~ Very angsty ~ Mild ~ Slightly angsty ~ Super sweet ~ Super angsty Don't dwell on the pain all the time; cherish the sweet moments.

It's easy to go to the kidneys, but difficult to go to the heart.

1. Jiang Qingjing, the Prince of Liangshan, likes ( ), and wants to use ( ) to steal ( ) from the Soul Locking Tower. However, due to his lack of knowledge about the mechanism, he failed to obtain the secret of the Soul Locking Tower. In the end, ( ) helped him obtain ( ) from the Soul Locking Tower (same as the third blank answer). His relationship with Chang Zimei is ( ). His conflict with Wanyou comes from ( ). Jiang Qingjing is the reincarnation of ( ). In his previous life, he and Yan Wan (Wanyou) had a ( ) relationship. 2. What is the relationship between the Ninth Princess, Yan Wan, and Wan You, and what are the secrets of their primordial spirits? (I'll leave some blanks here for now. You'll thank me later for this fill-in-the-blank and Q&A section~)

Hey everyone! I'm here! 😃😃 First, the title and synopsis. Hmm, no problem at all. Judging from the synopsis, it seems like a angst-filled story, quite captivating. 😊😊 Then there's the content. The opening has a prologue that sets the stage, seemingly telling a story of a past life, which is quite good. In the later chapters, I thought the character development was excellent, and their introductions felt natural. However, the background information and atmosphere were somewhat lacking; I hope the author can pay more attention to that in future chapters. 🤓🤓 Then there are a few minor issues. Personally, I feel your chapters aren't very long: the earlier parts are mostly under ten pages, with eight or nine pages being the most common. Also, the earlier chapters tend to be overly descriptive—especially the first three. There's a lot of dialogue, but without the use of character actions and expressions to build synergy. Despite the plot, it feels somewhat dry and uninteresting to read. 🤓🤓 There is great hope in this regard...

The following is a list of character relationships from the novel *Wild Geese Dew Formation*: Wan You (The female lead; details will be discussed later due to spoilers) Bai Yi (male lead, details will be discussed later due to spoilers) The Emperor (male, his name will be revealed gradually, Wan You's brother) Ninth Princess (female, supporting character) Jin Yu (male, Grand Preceptor of Xichuan, Wan You's supervisor, other identities involve spoilers, to be revealed slowly) Hu Die (female, Wan You's friend, the butterfly in human form) Hu Yuan (male, Hu Die's brother, Wan You's friend, not in human form; the relationship between Hu Die and Hu Yuan will be explained later) Fengyin (female, Hu Yuan's girlfriend) and Fengling (female, the transformed form of the bellflower, Wanyou's maid).

When I first read the synopsis of your article, I knew it would be incredibly heart-wrenching at times, and incredibly sweet at others. The two characters in the prologue immediately created a vivid image for me, and for some reason, it touched my heart and made me want to cry. It felt so bitter. Reading the synopsis again, I thought it would be even more bitter later on. Also, I think the female lead's character is very cute. Her character, including her friends and the male lead's friends, is also great. Does the male lead have memories of someone he has a crush on? I don't know, but you'll definitely explain it later. Now, let me point out a few issues I think are problematic. First, as many have said, your title itself is very interesting and captivating, which I find terrible. However, I think the format could be improved. If you agree, you could directly change it to, for example, the third... Changing Chapter 2 to Chapter 4 is fine. However, there are some parts I feel could be refined. Although you added character introductions for the female lead's friends later, this is just my personal opinion, as I'm not very experienced myself. Perhaps more detail could be added through the plot. For example, that introduction could actually be omitted, because through your writing, I already felt like I could see all the characters. This creates a sense of padding to meet the word count requirement. Also, I feel your language is excessive, which makes it feel disorganized. I think language is just a means of character description and can be replaced by other perspectives. Finally, I think your best quality is your writing—it's unpretentious, natural, and I really like it. Thank you for reading my work and giving me your valuable feedback.

Hey author, did you skip an update yesterday? ☠️💀

Hehe, good afternoon Qinghui! I'm starting a thread to mark the occasion~ I was shocked to see how many days you haven't updated, hurry up and write something! 😱😱😱

Hehe, I hope Qinghui has a happy July! 😘😘😘

Good morning, Qinghui 😂, happy new week! Here to send tickets~ Next up is my manager, I'm checking in. Sorry about the book review, I'll have to wait, I've been taking exams lately 😂