Legend of the False God

Cough~ The reason for the slow pace in the early stages is that I don't like the protagonist's nonsensical strength, and I also want to tell everyone that there are reasons for how the protagonist's personality changes later on. At the same time, it also depicted some modern microcosms and human relationships, but, well, it seems that it wasn't written in a very prominent way. Of course, it also laid many foreshadowing elements, which shouldn't have been left unresolved. However, the second volume will be faster-paced and will also return to fill in the gaps in the story.

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It's a traditional fantasy novel, but the plot is a bit scattered, reminiscent of Chen Dong's works. Without innovation, it's unlikely to stand out. My advice is: persevere. Perhaps this book will take off after three million words.

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Shuangquan's third book review Book Title: The Legend of the False God Author: Fei Yan Reading progress: Chapter 10: Concentration Realm Writing style: Perfectly suited to the fantasy genre, it has a gorgeous yet concise feel, making it a very easy read. The author has a rich vocabulary, successfully creating the atmosphere of cultivating immortality and seeking the Dao in the work. In particular, the battle scenes are vividly written, giving me a "Wow, awesome!" Feeling as I read on. Plot: It's a relatively classic fantasy novel, featuring a world where many cultivators crave immortality and the survival of the fittest prevails. The opening is fast-paced, with constant conflicts that immediately grab the reader's attention. Revenge is the main theme in the early chapters, and the number of encounters with both good and bad characters is roughly equal, contributing to a somewhat somber tone. While the first few chapters show some unnatural attempts to accelerate the plot, the writing improves significantly later on, and the school setting is quite common. The pacing, with its initial setbacks followed by a rise, is well-handled, and the protagonist's rapid rise provides a satisfying reading experience. (Because classic wish-fulfillment novels cannot do without the appearance of many beautiful women, I will discuss the romance-related storylines separately.) Romance: The protagonist is very young, described as a handsome and refined young man, which I'm quite satisfied with (I'm a woman myself, haha). The author's portrayal of female characters is quite good; they are ethereal and pleasing to the eye, making them vivid and natural to read, without being vulgar at all (to be honest, many male authors tend to have this problem, and I'm glad Fei Yan doesn't). The beginning, with the protagonist having a girl he likes, only to have her taken away by another force, seemed like a classic trope to me. However, after experiencing numerous setbacks in a short period, he unexpectedly meets a truly suitable and outstanding woman, becoming a perfect couple. The protagonist's emotions are quite naive, like a young boy experiencing his first love, yet he already carries the burden of a deep-seated hatred. He and the intelligent, gentle, and understanding girl would make a wonderful pair. The pace at which the male lead and Shui Yunshang got together was too fast, which felt sudden to me, and I was curious about how they could have fallen for each other. However, after they got together, they showed a harmonious and attractive relationship, and the male lead was very devoted, so it was quite good. Detail: 1. The male lead's name is Zhou Yuan, which seems to be a very common name, haha. 2. The male protagonist moves from the backward wilderness to the orthodox cultivation society at the forefront of the times, where his already good talent has room to be displayed. The author grasps the change of the male protagonist's inner concept very naturally, creating a male protagonist who is strong-willed, idealistic, but also somewhat naive. 3. To be honest, the protagonist's cheat ability came on very suddenly. He successively gained the power of death, the power of nothingness, and the power of desolation. It was very exciting to watch, but as a reader with limited experience, I didn't really understand these three powers. They felt a bit mysterious and enigmatic. In short, the protagonist had a lot of luck. 4. The male protagonist's life is truly tragic. Right from the start, he encounters a small-scale war stemming from the grudges of the older generation, followed by an invasion by ghost ships that kills many innocent members of his tribe. Later, upon entering the deserted city, he faces discrimination, robbery, and bullying. However, the author's clever plot lies in the kind people the protagonist encounters, who act like a beacon of light in the darkness. 5. It's clear the author places great importance on the male protagonist's emotional development; Fei Yan is an author who takes responsibility for her characters. If the author could further explore Zhou Yuan's traits through subtle details, differentiating him from other protagonists, the story would become more fleshed out. Thoughts: This is my first time writing a review for an Eastern fantasy cultivation novel. Since I haven't read many fantasy novels, I can't make any comparisons, but overall, it's a novel that I'm interested in continuing to read. The key point is the author's delicate writing style, and the later plot development didn't have any major flaws. It would be best if more distinct character traits were added, especially the psychological descriptions of the supporting characters. Keep it up, and I look forward to the male lead's future story!

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