Who Dares Touch the Man of a Transmigrated Sister?
穿越姐的男人谁敢碰
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- 223k Words
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- Ancient Romance
- Subgenre
- Alternate History
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- 5y ago
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My story is pretty simple, and the plot is a bit old-fashioned (a lot of people who've read it have said so, and I think so too, haha). It's mainly about Xiao Shuihan, a woman from the 21st century who transmigrates to ancient times. Together with the male lead, she tears into fake white lotuses, gives scumbags a brutal comeuppance, searches for her birth parents, and eventually finds true love. Pretty old-fashioned, right? 😂 Honestly, I thought about that when I first started posting on 17k, bu
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Hahaha, just look at the title of Chapter Twenty-Six! Hahahaha! It's killing me with laughter! The author's sense of humor runs throughout the entire story! Ahem, I just finished reading it. From the fight scene in the first chapter, I could clearly feel how incredibly strong the author is, far stronger than me. The action sequences were so vividly portrayed that they gave me a real sense of the scene. After that, I was quickly able to define the female lead's personality. That was my first impression. (Smack~ Savoring it now)
Seriously, why do all the bad guys have to talk big before doing something bad, and then wait to get beaten up? Why can't they just sneak up in the dark and beat someone up? If they survive, three years is a huge bonus, even the death penalty is worth it. If they can't, they can just say they mistook someone for someone else and run away... Hmm, in my humble opinion, the main characters are well-developed, but the supporting characters aren't portrayed in much detail. Supporting characters are people too, they should have their own image, not just the image that's commonly perceived by the public.
The onomatopoeia is used so well that the dialogue is natural and fluent, humorous and lighthearted, and very vivid. It's a seamless and enjoyable read. However, the initial setup is a little repetitive, with the word "time travel" being mentioned three times. I think that could be reduced a bit. The time-travel element is well-crafted, with a blend of ancient Chinese style and modern perspectives. I especially laughed out loud when I saw Hello Kitty. I love the female lead's decisive and efficient personality, which truly demonstrates what it means to be a "sister." The chapter titles are very interesting, making me want to flip through them and read the content. Here's a little suggestion: In Chapter Two, the female protagonist only realizes that she is wearing ancient clothes after the fight. I think this should have been shown in Chapter One. After all, the clothes are on her body, so it's normal to realize it immediately. Moreover, it can be seen when she raises her hand during the fight. Also, at the beginning of Chapter Two, it says that apart from the neck, there is no feeling anywhere else, and then immediately afterward it says that the headache is severe. I think the transition is a bit too fast. It would be better to add something else in the middle, such as remembering something first, which then triggered the headache, etc. How could Xiao Shuihan know her half-sister was difficult to get along with on their first meeting? Uh... After being jilted, Xiao Shuihan immediately labeled the Crown Prince a scumbag without asking why. She seemed a little anxious; perhaps some internal monologue could have been added... Seeing that the later chapters were all about handsome men, I got a little excited. I've always been powerless against handsome men (auntie smile). That's all for now, time to go see the handsome guys!
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The time-traveling sister is indeed extraordinary.
A captivating novel with a compelling story. I've already read and added it to my favorites. Wishing it great success!
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The first chapter was quite refreshing. If this is the author's debut work, it's really quite good. The first chapter is concise, with seemingly no superfluous descriptions. However, starting from the second chapter, some paragraphs become rather long; the author should pay attention to paragraph breaks. Chapter Seven contains a lot of descriptions of men and needs to be streamlined. Descriptions of appearance and scenery should be concise, just a few sentences. If there are elements of power struggles within the household, the conflicts could be intensified, meaning the villains could be made more despicable.
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