Return from the Army

I read the entire book in one go, and made some comments on each chapter. Here are my overall thoughts and speculations. As I'm a newbie, my abilities are limited, so my insights may seem naive; please forgive any shortcomings. 1: I really like the rhythm. It's not too fast or too slow, but everything is just right. For example, A is the cause, then B is the result, then C is the effect of A. This technique is logically ingenious and is something I lack the most. 2: The language may not be as exquisite as some books, but it is just right, sketching out a person's perfect character in just a few words. 3: The foreshadowing is very deep, but it should still be in progress in chapter 30. I hope the author's book will reach one million views, but I am also curious about what will happen later. After all, the world is only so big, and there is only the Three Kingdoms. 4: I speculate that his father and brother are not dead. And his younger brother may become a big boss in the future. 5: Hopefully, this theft will be used as an excuse to drive out all the collateral branches of the family. Weiwei will stay behind to be her younger brother's maid, hehehe. 6: It is speculated that Mo's background is that of a prince from an enemy country, plotting against a nation.

Although I've only read five chapters, I still think the author writes incredibly well! The story begins with a picture of "filial piety and harmony," but to my naive viewer, the father is doomed to die soon. And indeed, that's how it turned out in the comments... Reading your work, it feels similar to Mulan. The problem is that I didn't find any formulaic elements in your writing; it's full of originality. Perhaps it's because I read more physical books and less online novels… The plot is well-structured, avoiding both melodrama and blandness. The first chapter immediately draws the reader in, vividly portraying the brother's love for his sister. Crucially, the author possesses a natural talent for language, crafting detailed descriptions that capture both physical appearance and inner emotions, making the meaning instantly understandable. I don't have much to offer in terms of advice, after all, a newbie can't give advice to a veteran author who has already published their work... I can only wish you all the best in your writing, may you become a legend! Okay, here are a few little hearts for you~

At the beginning, the female protagonist is in a harmonious and enviable environment, with a loving father, a filial daughter, and a protective older brother. This feeling, coupled with the father's departure for war and the great changes that befell the family, created a very strong impact. The female protagonist suddenly transforms from the second daughter of a general, cared for by her brother, into the eldest daughter of a general who died in battle; one can imagine the hardships she will face later in life. This female-oriented novel is a good read if you have the patience. The reason it requires patience is that the female lead's presence is relatively low in the first six chapters. I personally feel that the parts about entering the palace for an audience and the battlefield crisis can be glossed over. Then, the female protagonist refuses to believe that her father died in battle. She struggles to survive and investigates the cause of her father's death, which unfolds as the main storyline gradually reveals the beginning and end of this great war. This way, the female lead won't have a low profile in the early stages. After all, the first step in making a novel engaging is for the protagonist to be believable. This isn't a big problem if it's not a web novel, but web novel readers might crave a faster pace and a sense of immersion, which relies on the protagonist's perspective. I've read six chapters patiently overall, and it's a flawless story. I hope readers will be understanding and patient. Finally, I wish your new work great success! 😊

Hey author, I'm here! I finished reading it in one go. The beginning was a bit bland, probably just foreshadowing, but it got really exciting later on. It was interesting. I rarely read this kind of story; it's all fighting and killing, and it's really gory, hahaha. However, the author's writing showed me a different kind of charm in women. In the past, it was always the men who were brave and good at fighting, while the women stayed in their boudoirs. This article is quite interesting. It shows that the women are brave and good at fighting, while the men are resourceful. It doesn't say whether the men are brave and good at fighting, but I suppose they are too. I've figured out the basic strategy, I've made it clear. I always feel that there's something wrong with the emperor, but I can't quite put my finger on it. But there's definitely something wrong. Also, after she went to war, there was a place where a woman was reporting to a man. When he heard that it was a woman from the Luo family who went to war, he became furious. This should be the person behind it all, but whether they are the real one is unknown. Keep up the good work, I'm already a fan!

This book is now available! Regarding update schedule, updates will be sporadic.

Is this a sign that they're not going to write anymore?

So... You're not planning to update anymore? 🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊🦊

Cuicuicuicuicui geng!

Please keep up the good work!

Is my fox hibernating?