Douluo: My System Is Unconvinced Again

Let me talk about the front first. At the beginning, the protagonist was too hypocritical. It could be evaluated as shameless or green tea. However, after having a relationship with Liu Erlong, he changed his style and directly said that the two people from Tianshui Academy he just met were his women. Then the protagonist's previous personality does not match. How come the protagonist is either extremely hypocritical or extremely shameless?

I don't know if you have noticed, it was originally a 7-treasure glazed tower, but after listening to a few chapters, it became 9-treasure. You can say that you are cheating on Tang San. I kept it for the sake of reward. I let Yu Xiaogang go, changed the trick on Flanders, and changed the setting. The fat man's sex can increase the soul power~ That good-for-nothing prince's level 83 soul power? Lord Snake took down the Man-Faced Demon Spider, and Tang San gave in with just a verbal promise? Then he forcibly obtained a soul bone for himself. Can an ordinary person have the pistol blueprint? After getting the jelly grass, Xiao Wu would not be heartbroken by lovesickness. It would also help Master Snake discover that Xiao Wu is a soul beast. Even if the male protagonist condenses the soul ring in front of everyone, it would be fine! Haha, even if it's a cool article, you can't write it like this. It's like a clever person writing about Naruto and saying that a ninja team leader is a shadow-level leader~

It's disgusting. It's written about having a harem, and it's the kind of story where a woman has to lick the protagonist, otherwise she won't accept it. It's a good name, I won't force anyone, if you don't volunteer yourself, I won't ask for it. Vomited. Vomited.

The protagonist is too hypocritical. As I said before, he didn't want to break up Dai Mubai and Zhu Zhuqing, but everything he did was to break them up. He envied Yu Xiaogang for being favored by the two goddesses, but after he used a method similar to "hypnosis" to transfer the love of the two women, he couldn't accept it. This was obvious and obvious, and even more hypocritical than Tang San. We don't mind having a harem, but if you use despicable and low-level methods to open a harem, and treat feelings like the protagonist, you can't accept it. Either you should be a real villain, or you should be a real gentleman. Being a hypocrite is nothing. Let's talk about strength improvement. You are born at level 30 and have three top-level martial arts spirits. However, your first and second spirit rings still absorbed two yellow spirit rings according to Yu Xiaogang's theory. Is this how you use it? You actually gave the two ice and fire fairy grasses of the Ice and Fire Eyes to an ordinary rabbit to eat first. It was a complete waste. Directly condensing the fifth spirit ring on your own in front of Tang San and Tang Hao, it's hard for you not to make people think that you are a spirit beast incarnate. Aren't you afraid that Tang Hao will kill you to get the spirit ring and soul bones when Chen Xin is not around?

If reality fails, don't write novels to satisfy yourself

There are three reasons why I don't recommend this book. 1. As an online novel, the text is understandable, but if you repeat the text over and over again, it's a bit hard to understand. 2. The plot is very poor. I can understand why a system is added. Everything that cannot be solved is pushed to the system. In the early stage, when I was a soul master, I suddenly turned into a soul beast. 3. People can't be established. Hypocrites who hate Tang San turn out to be hypocrites themselves. In the later stage, they even directly change their character design.

The protagonist is a hypocrite, so good at pretending

The beginning is quite readable, with a bit of a fanfic feel; but after only a hundred chapters, it starts to let loose, and the rest is just a big stallion dressed in fanfiction. As someone who can stand harem stories, I find it disgusting! Moreover, the writing style is very poor, the modal particles can be described several times, and the panel information is described once or twice in ten chapters, which is a waste of words. Readers! Avoid the trap!

Although it is said that there are hundreds of millions of bits and pieces of nonsense, but after throwing away the brain, when I watched it, I felt that it was just... Cool!

The protagonist is too scumbag. This is not the past. In the past, we could have three wives and four concubines, but now we have monogamy. Writing like this is very harmful to students' health, especially to simple people. Don't bring your past thoughts into the novel. Your novel is too shameless and is disgusting to many people.