What Do I Do If I Look Too Intimidating?

In fact, the writing is not very good, but the author's monologue in the end still didn't make me give a bad review. It is undeniable that social themes are always attractive, especially those in hot-blooded colleges and universities, but it is a pity that the highs and lows come again and again. Many plots are not reasonable, and even the common sense of fighting is not Yes, but it can be seen that the author wanted to improve it step by step, but unfortunately it still fell apart, so that the finale was unfinished. The writing style has gradually matured, which can be considered a growth in writing. I feel that I should be a novice. I hope to polish up the book and make an outline next time. The plot setting is quite good.

I think the previous writing was quite good, but as the author himself said, he wrote several very toxic chapters due to his own emotions, and he persuaded most of them to quit. In the end, the author lost his mentality and ended the book hastily. It was a pity that it ended so quickly.

After watching half of it, I felt very good. Everyone in the comment section said that the writing was broken at the end, so I skipped through a few chapters and the conclusion. Well, that's it, keep the good impression of this book and look forward to the next one. Although I don't know if it exists anymore

A lot of stuff blended together and the writing was very confusing. The main line of the plot is that it comes out one after another, which is simply a weird thing. Waste of time

This is a common disease. At first, my writing was good, probably because I never heard anyone yelling or scolding me; later, after hearing a few "poisonous" words, I felt like a frightened bird, and I couldn't even hold my pen steady. I think the author was a little timid at first, just like a country man who used his fists and kicks to fight alone. But when the spectators booed, he felt that his whole body was full of flaws, and he shrunk and couldn't even stand. So it was a good story, the first half still looked like a human being, but the second half became limp, just like a pot of good porridge that had to be mixed with half a bucket of cold water - just to avoid scalding anyone's mouth. Little do they know that the most poisonous thing in the world is not the "poisonous point" in the article, but the rope in the author's own heart. If someone curses once, one of them will be tied; if someone curses twice, two will be tied. In the end, the characters died and the story collapsed. Pity those spectators who had cheered before, but now they turned around and cursed "collapse" - they were often the same people who cursed "poisonous" in the first place. What is this called? This is called "people's words make gold, but accumulation destroys bones." The author originally wanted to please everyone, but ended up losing even himself. In the end, there is only a pile of ruins left for people to point out and say: "Look, this is the fate of following the crowd."

What the hell

Stronger than me

The front is good, but I don't know what I'm writing on the back.