Super Private Server

Although the plot becomes more and more exaggerated and there are many legends coming out of the system. It is a headache to have chivalry points and tens of millions of money everywhere, but his occasional memories of old legend players are quite touching and remind me of the era when I played legends.

The mission threshold in Chapter 69 is really disgusting.

Speechless, bland, without any highlights. Luo Li, I can't finish one thing in three chapters. The dog licking is disgusting, and there are all kinds of bugs. The first sentence says that spiritual energy disappears, and the next sentence says that warriors can absorb spiritual energy in the air. The first sentence says there is no country but the federation, and the next sentence talks about the leaders of various countries.

There's nothing interesting about licking a dog, and the writing is not good either.

To be honest, for a long time, the male protagonist was sometimes Chen Tiancai, and sometimes Chen Tian, ​​it was a mess.

I read Invisibility Ring first, then this one. This one is more poisonous than that one. It was good in the early stage. It may have persuaded many people to dismiss it, but at least it is a bit new. At least I am writing seriously. Maybe the data is not good, but I have let myself go in the middle period. It is completely YY in a dream. It feels good as it pleases. It is very abstract. There was also a boss who was so angry that the data collapsed, and the whole thing became a super-changing private server. I didn't know what I was writing at the end. In the end, there was nothing to write about, just a stallion and a girl, and it ended like a lightning. In the last chapter, the final boss appeared, and then he crushed me. I just laughed, it was so messy.

The author has traveled through more than a hundred chapters, and others have tried to kill him many times. The time traveler author has never thought about protecting his family. My survival depends entirely on the author's writing skills.

I've read Chapter 60, and the writing is average. It's about a pig's foot who was reborn in his 30s. After his rebirth, he became very public. It was said that the better his performance, the more attention the federation paid to him. As a result, all kinds of troubles came one after another. Zhang Yang is good, but the problem is that you, an ant who has not grown up, casually took out equipment and skills beyond the level and used them across levels. This is not obvious. Tell everyone that I have a password, come and trouble me. This is not flamboyant, this is mindless. Half a step ahead is a genius, one step ahead is a madman. 30 Years before rebirth, you have worked hard in society for more than 20 years and have no life experience at all? The brainless pig's trotter still lives in a war-like world, and he deserves to die for the obvious secret. Also, the item data obtained from the pig's trotters is also very confusing. There are two important items in the front, but only one in the later statistics. There are errors in the important materials for the growth of the pig's trotters. This shows that the author was perfunctory in counting these items when writing. It has not been put on the shelves yet. Even with this attitude, the editor will not recommend you. If you are perfunctory to the readers, of course the readers will be perfunctory to you.

Dog licking article

I really can't stand it