Xuanhuan: I Gained a Ten-Thousandfold Cultivation Talent from the Start

What are you doing wrong? Being someone else's dog. It's boring to watch. Give up.

Not bad

Why does garbage always win people's hearts?

Lese, I can't understand the state of things, it's a mess, and I still act like a dog when I have trouble.

1. The writing style is immature. In order to write a sudden reversal of the plot, the same writing method appears three or four times. In the end, he succeeded in shaping the protagonist into a villain: he has always been a loner, and no one knows his whereabouts; regardless of the life and death of his superiors and subordinates, he is always not present when he is needed most; but at the critical moment, the male protagonist appears as a savior; the same routine appears again and again, and it is obvious that he has only learned this way of writing. 2. Can't distinguish between "that" and "which", can't distinguish between flat and retroflex sounds, and misuse "come from" as "come to". 3. I really can't stand it anymore after Chapter 423, so I decided to give up reading.

The protagonist is like a street gangster, he doesn't use his brain. After reading 50 chapters, he hasn't even introduced the state of the cultivation system. I don't know what to write.

Good

There are so many typos, how did it pass the review?

Mercenary????? That's it