Online Gaming: I Can Change the Flow of Time for Everything

The plot of this book is well written, and the subject matter is different from ordinary online game novels. Let me tell you my impressions: First of all, the protagonist Shen Fei is a very responsible person who is good at adapting to changes. He is also thoughtful and the transition between dual identities is very smooth. The villain is not mindless, and the foreshadowing is just right. The story characters of various characters and NPCs are very vivid, and the human nature is also expressed just right. Secondly, the main and branch plots of the entire novel are very clear (the main and branch plots here refer to the main tasks and actions of the protagonist in reality and in the game, and I apologize for any mistakes). For example, the main plot is to practice in eternal life to gain lifespan and continue to become stronger, and the branch plot is to resist external evil. Clan invasion, to find out why immortality was created, why spiritual energy dissipated and resurrected, why "immortals" outside the territory destroyed the spiritual veins, why Yaoyao was betrayed, what is the plan of the Eternal Life Palace, what is the plan of the evil tribe outside the territory, why is it said that "this world is just a corner of the whole world", etc. The whole article lays a lot of foreshadowing and is very exciting; the plot is very compact and coherent. The author will correct any mistakes he accidentally made in time. He has a good attitude and respects the readers. Finally, let me talk about the shortcomings: The last one or two chapters of the article were written in a bit of a rush, and a few times I mentioned the real-life name of the protagonist in the game. Also, the ending is a bit hasty. First of all, the killing of Yaoyao's best friend did not crush the plan of the evil alien clan, and it can even be said to have no connection; and the evil alien clan has not been completely wiped out, so the main mission in the game should not be completed; in the ending, how does Shen Yue know that her younger brother is time, and there is also the idea of raising the level to full level. It doesn't match up with the early stage of the novel (it was mentioned in the early stage of the novel that there are higher levels in the Mahayana stage, and it seems that you can ascend), where did those so-called "immortals" come from, what is their purpose, etc.; There are still many foreshadowings that have not been taken back, such as the story of the daughter of the gods and earth that the protagonist Shen Fei created at the beginning is basically not told later, as well as some of the branch plots I mentioned above Let me tell you my personal opinion: There are too few people reading this book, and there are very few comments, likes, votes, and rewards. I think the author was very confident and motivated to write this book at the beginning, but due to its lack of popularity (or other factors), his enthusiasm may have gradually waned, so it ended hastily. But I think the author can write this book well, and except for the ending, I personally think it is very interesting. I hope the author can regain the confidence and motivation at the beginning, and give this novel a more exciting ending. I also hope that the author will not easily let external factors kill his initial enthusiasm in the future ~ Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง Final summary: The plot writing is very exciting, with foreshadowing and reversal, the character description is in place, and the article is compact and ups and downs; However, the ending is sloppy and perfunctory. I hope the author can improve it a lot. Overall, this book is wonderful and highly recommended (´-ω-`)

This book is very good and I highly recommend it. The author probably thought that no one would read this book, so it ended so outrageously. Apart from the not-so-good ending, the number of people is pretty good.

Hydrology + unfinished building

From the setting and plot point of view, it's still okay, but the ending is unfinished.

There are too many problems, and there are many wrong uses, and the IQ is also greatly reduced. Fools all know that spending time is all about time. The biggest obstacle to getting to Yuanying is that there is no time to go through the tribulation. When Hua Wuque went in, he didn't know how to cultivate himself. And Jin Dan can't go in. Only Yuan Ying and Huashen have not appeared once in two months. Isn't there any suspicion? Where did the investigation of the 18-year-old owner of Xinzhou Village go? Then I say the most important thing is that it is unfinished.

The idea is very good, and the writing is also very good. It's a pity that Chapter 155 is unfinished. No wonder there are no votes... Next time, be sure to keep your eyes open. Don't come in if it is unfinished.

It will directly become an unfinished building.

The plot is good, but the literary talent is lacking

It sucked in the end

The writing was good at the beginning, but it fell apart at the end.