I Guarded the Abandoned Pill Room for Four Years. How Did I Become an Immortal?

It's quite good to read. The author's writing skills have improved a lot. The plot is compact. I was hooked after a while.

It's very well written, please keep up the good work.

Vivid connectivity is great! Wonderful plot and brilliant writing

Clear thinking

It was still a cool article at the beginning, but later on, the world view became more and more grand, and I looked forward to seeing different worlds of cultivating immortals. But the personalization of characters still needs to be strengthened

He said that his appearance has become ordinary, and now he is pretty again 😂

What kind of thing is it to be finished before the writing is finished?

Too many loopholes.

In the early stage, it was still a main plot with twists and turns, but later on it became more and more confusing, with dozens or hundreds of chapters, and it was so confusing.