Rivals on the Road to Heaven

This book is so childishly written, and the writing style is terrible, as if it was written by a child.

I feel fine

What are you writing about? Golden elixir stage + foundation building stage, can't you handle a Qi refining stage? Play that? On a live dog? It's written like a running account, I'll do whoever I want, it's so boring! Everything is taken for granted, just like a child playing house.

It's such a mess. It's all women throwing themselves into my arms.

It makes people feel comfortable from beginning to end, haha, this book is worth reading!

It's okay, a little short and a little rushed, a little longer and more detailed would be best.

The only thing that attracted me in the article was the protagonist's unwillingness to admit defeat, even though he has the aura of the protagonist 😂

So pretty

It's not a mess, right?

Good