White Ring Douluo

A thoughtful work is destined not to be lost to the public. Among the many Douluo fanfics, this article can be said to be unique. Different from most fan fiction, this article is more about thinking about the essence of the martial arts training system. As one of the many time-travel novels, the protagonist is also different from others in thinking about problems. This is probably reflected in the fact that he will not bring himself into the world, but from the perspective of an ideological liberator, he will lead the people on the mainland to enlighten their thoughts instead of blindly pursuing strength. This is the outstanding feature of this article and what makes me most emotional. As a young man in the new century, he has thousands of thoughts in his mind. Why should he stick to using other people's methods to become stronger? Isn't his biggest and best "novice gift package" his own thoughts? From this point of view, most time-travel protagonists in novels fall into the inferior category. My opinions are subject to my own limitations, so please forgive me if I am wrong.

The plot is okay, the character of the protagonist is okay, but the bad thing is that a mouse excrement ruins a pot of porridge. The protagonist thinks about the follow-up in his heart, which is okay, but it is best not to say it out loud. It seems too stupid and makes others think too stupid. Comics are one and reality is one. You can't decide a person because of a comic. If you have traveled through time, then there is reality. You are in Reality has many uncertain factors or has changed due to time travel, so your inexplicable prophecy and casual follow-up are really not in line with the protagonist's IQ. One moment, the analysis is perfect, and the other moment, it is like a child and speaks such sentences that do not match the speech. I hope the author can change it, so maybe this will be a good fanfic.

The writing is strictly forbidden and there are no obvious errors. It's just that the protagonist often makes some meaningless prophetic remarks, which I personally feel bad about.

The writing is okay, but it's not consistent with my overall thoughts. So I won't give a good review. I hope Tang San's pig and the others. Don't read it if it doesn't lead to good results. That's what I can't stand watching the most. Several of the trash inside actually had good results.

Nanny type Douluo fanfic

It's not dark for the sake of being dark, which is a plus. Some things in the plot are a little too clever, and some things are a little unrealistic, but the rest are okay.

A lump

I have the same voice and personality since I was in elementary school, which feels weird. Looking at the introduction, it said that it was the elder of Wuhun Palace who came in to take a look, but I didn't expect that it was Tang Licking Dog.

It's okay, but I don't understand the plot more and more.

A dead visitor