Marvel: Infinite Evolution

Subject: good Writing style: average Character setting: Bad, in order to highlight that the protagonist has powerful force and can make the remaining power weak, all kinds of forced sauces are used. For example, Nick, the director of S. H. I. E. L. D., Faced the threat from the protagonist and chose to give in just to maintain his dignity. However, whether it is the director in the comic version who is injected with drugs and has a long life and peak physical condition, or the director in the movie version who is a top agent, he will not compromise casually. Moreover, the setting of Widow Sister conflicts with the protagonist at the beginning. As an excellent agent, Widow Sister will never perform tasks based on her own personal emotions, let alone shoot an ordinary person, even if he is a person who may have special powers. This is a forcible deception. Background setting: According to the article, it is mainly based on the movie version of Marvel, but the author is not familiar with either comics or movies, which makes the writing very confusing. Language description: It's really bad, with few words and a lot of typos. And if you want to portray the indifference of the protagonist, don't talk so much. Combat power setting: It collapsed at the beginning. It can be seen from this that the author has no understanding of Marvel's combat power. As powerful men at the level of Heavenly Father, Ancient One and Odin can know the direction of some key things in the future, and the most serious thing in the future is to eliminate Thanos, but the main He interfered with the growth of Iron Man and even directly KO Thanos in the future, which will naturally directly affect the future line. In the essay, these two people who can fight against the Dimension God are not even noticed by Ji Fei, but the author also said before that these two can threaten the protagonist. Some strange settings: Regarding the spread method of the Void Religion, this one makes me laugh. First of all, the protagonist was an ordinary person before time travel. He had no demon-like wisdom, no professional training, and no accumulation of life experience. His strength was all given by the prophets of the plot and the system. However, when facing Tony and the store clerk, he could instantly understand what the other person was thinking. Why don't you go to heaven? You can change your genes with a flick of your finger, you can make someone as awesome as Glass with just a flick of your finger, you can see it in Marvel, you can also have Apocalypse facing off against Star-Lord, but they are just enhancements. If you are so awesome, why are you still afraid of the future? Oh, the power of the system? Haha There is also the human species. There are humans everywhere in the universe. All in all, bad

To be honest, I started writing the protagonist, and then the protagonist's role didn't appear much. And there is much more content about you Iron Man and others than the main character. Quite boring

"I Evolve Infinitely in the Marvel World" is a fantasy fan novel set in the Marvel universe. The protagonist Harvey continues to evolve by absorbing the power of the void, gradually mastering powerful abilities and interacting with Marvel characters. The protagonist Harvey has a unique evolution system, which can improve his skill level by consuming evolution points. The "upgrade flow" is combined with Marvel science fiction elements, emphasizing that the protagonist achieves qualitative changes in abilities through rational planning and resource accumulation. The theme revolves around "evolution" and "control", which includes both the breakthrough of individual power and the exploration and challenge of the rules of the universe.

I have been writing about Tony and other Marvel heroes, but the main character has too few roles.

It was quite good at the beginning, but the plot became more and more sluggish later on, and the protagonist even went offline for a long time, and the overall description became more and more dull. I felt that it was readable but not very long for me.

Iron Man is the real protagonist, and this so-called protagonist is Iron Man's nanny.

What kind of God of the Void is obviously the God of Water? Even a small supporting character has to have five chapters of causes and consequences and two chapters of inner activities. Who cares? There are too many inner dramas among the characters.

What I want to say is, if you have that strength, why not absorb those mutants? Some mutants are not very strong, but they have very strong abilities. As long as you absorb them and strengthen those abilities, they will be very awesome. For example, the group of people around the Polaris movie, there are several Eternals who are very powerful, and there are also the alien monsters in the Eternals movie. They have absorbed it, and you can absorb other people's abilities faster. Whatever, Planet Yige has also absorbed it, so that you can create your own planet and life. If you can go to DC and absorb the Code of Life, you can also unify the hero Golden Man, and take a few Marvel girls to leave the earth and play in the universe by yourself, instead of playing house with the people on the earth.

You're too brainless. Don't expose yourself if you don't have the strength to rival the universe. If I don't beat the shit out of you, it's disrespectful to the boss.

The author's word count is always that of Ivey Ambenaka. I get annoyed just looking at it