Pokemon: The Dragon-Type Champion

I still like it very much. The writing is very good and seems to be very coherent. There is nothing uncomfortable about it. What stands out to me the most is that the cheats in this article are not that outrageous. The most important thing is to watch the protagonist's own will and strength grow step by step, which is really empathetic. The early stage was so difficult, just like a real grassroots boy, there would be failures. It's not like those invincible articles that use routines like assembly lines. I really like it. It's rare to find such high-quality Pokémon articles! Help!

Anyway, I've finished watching it, so I'll give it a good review. I'm not going to brag about it. It looked good in the early stage, but I didn't feel that good in the later part. Adam was too outrageous, too strong in his portrayal, and he had many trump cards, but he died like a plot kill, and he was a human being who only had the Creation Stone. When he first came into contact with it, he had no idea what it was. West, the article doesn't say anything about finding someone to study it (I doubt it can be done, this thing is too top-notch), and then rely on this thing to break through all the defenses of the mythical beast, swallowing the flesh, blood and functions of the mythical beast. Why don't you explode and die? What's more, what you eat is not a human being, what you eat is a mythical beast, and the genes are completely incomparable.

The writing is very messy. The author hopes to write a more realistic world view of Pokémon. But it was very unsuccessful, and many things were unreasonable, but he couldn't come back from it at all. The Pokémon world is inherently irrational, and you have to try to make it accept the logic of the real world. This is no problem, but the author's writing style is insufficient to do this, and it becomes a four-dimensional image. The character design is also not successful. The protagonist's image is inconsistent in many plots. To be honest, there are many attempts to write the Pokémon worldview in a realistic style, but success is rare. Most of the successful works are in a romantic style. In the final analysis, the fan author himself is not confident and is too deeply influenced by the original work.

This person set up in such a mess. He was filling holes and running around all the time. It was so chaotic. To be honest, if you want to be close to reality, it is better to write about fantasy beasts than to write about fan fiction. Your world view does not match the world view of Pokémon. Let it go

It's an out-and-out sewer. Even sitting here, I think Pokémon is a level-breaking game, and I think Pokémon is a pet system, but what is Pokémon actually? It's a growing pain. Even if it's a brainless protagonist like Xiaozhi, he knows where I'm going to hit and what I'm going to use. Yes, I want to change, I want to change my tactics. Except for Pikachu, his partners are constantly changing, and occasionally there is a returning Charizard. How come you have 6 Pokémon in your hands that will last throughout your life and throughout the life of this book. What do you think? Don't you know how to copy animations? Games, let alone games, who doesn't play Pokémon games just to get flashes and character traits? After a week of grinding, the question becomes, how come you write a book that shows you the qualifications for a champion, hidden traits, and the personality of a houseworker? All of these things mean that there is absolutely no value in this kind of training? Those who know these Pokémon but don't know them all think you write about urban pets. Anyone who has watched the anime and played the game knows it. In addition to buying props to restore health, at other times everyone is not only playing animations in the wild, but also playing adventure games in the wild, not to mention that I fish in caves under the grass every day. This is the fucking Pokémon. Why are you all growing up? Where did it sink? What did your growth tell you? I haven't seen you growing up and writing about growing up and working hard with Pokémon. Because you don't have the writing skills, then you give up here. If you write about your game life, you will be cheating. Just stop writing. You can't continue writing. It's not good.

In a word: It is tasteless to eat, and it is a pity to throw it away. The plot is pretty good, but many parts are simply unreasonable, and the character design is pretty bad. The dialogue between the characters is just for the sake of dialogue, which is monotonous and uninteresting.

Well, what can I say? I feel a bit decadent. It's written very slowly. There are only two Pokémon in Chapter 41. Even if you want to go to the elite stream, it's better to be so slow. One has not been purified, and the other cannot be purified at the moment. And most importantly, you have to write it in such a frustrating way. How can people read it?

The plot written by the author is very good, but there are problems with the characters. After reading it, I have no memory points. There are also battles... It's hard to describe in one sentence.

Finished reading, not bad

Two words: garbage