White Ring Douluo

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So far, the pace of this book is very smooth, including the character image and personality. There is no OOC or character breakdown. If you are a pure newcomer, this performance can be said to be very good. But besides that, this book also gave me a surprise! The delicate plot without glitches and the new application and interpretation of soul power are like the sudden appearance of Easter eggs in a regular gift box, which makes people feel novel and want to continue reading. In addition, the author's chapters are also good. For example, now I am looking forward to the next chapter. Come on, author, I'm waiting for you to put it on the shelves.

Please don't misread the title of the book, "On how the protagonist becomes a dog for Tang San naturally"

In short, this is a dream-fulfilling novel! The author's writing style is not bad, and the plot arrangement is different from ordinary online articles. This is not a story about a male protagonist who is powerful alone, but a story about Douluo book fans traveling to the Douluo world to help fans realize their dreams, making up for every flaw and experiencing the beauty of troubled times! It is definitely a rare good article in fan fiction. ps: Some of the plot turning points in the early stage are a bit abrupt, but it's only one or two chapters, so just get over it.

Although I don't like to read every chapter, and I even jump to read it, I surprisingly feel that the author has a peaceful mind, and the characters in his writing are also like this, so I don't hate it! Among the many starting point novels, this is a breath of fresh air!

After taking a look at the introduction, I thought that the main character was an honorary elder of Wuhun Palace. I thought that the main character was for personal development, but in the end, he joined the group again. I was speechless. ☹️

If the master and Bibi Dong are together, I will choose Qian Renxue, the younger generation is more talented If not, I will choose Ye Lingling, who has a nanny

Hang in there, this is my favorite fanfic so far, my contribution is not big, I just express my feelings.

(Contains spoilers) I think this book is quite good as an invincible online novel. I read it in one sitting for three or four days in a row. It was very refreshing and the pretentiousness was not out of the ordinary. The moves developed by the protagonist using his soul power and the strange soul guides he made are a highlight, but it is a pity that the soul guide line was not written in depth. Then what should I say, it feels like a fast-forward version of Douluo 1. Under the pull of the protagonist, the Seven Monsters team reached the finale without experiencing any setbacks. Those comments about giving girls away made my brain blood pressure rise. I suggest you ignore them and reject ntr starting from you and me! The protagonist's character in the first half and the second half made me feel that he was completely two people. Moreover, a liver emperor cultivator directly turned into an Internet addicted teenager, the kind that could not quit for 20 years. It was so sudden that it made me and the protagonist feel like a mental illness. I found Qian Renxue's betrayal of the protagonist surprising, but not annoying. In short, come on, author.

Author, I want to write a sequel to your book. If you agree, I will continue writing. The synopsis is about what happened tens of millions of years later, when the Sun and Moon Continent collided. It also tells the story of the collision of different soul guide civilizations, quoting part of the setting of Dou 2. At that time, Lebai was taken away by the pit you dug, and the rest of your "main universe" and other foreshadowings were not touched. However, the update of the writing style is definitely not satisfactory. Type of Time Travel If you agree, I will write a detailed outline

The writing is actually pretty good, and the idea of ​​breaking through the soul ring is very good. I prefer new things, and I really don't like the plot that contains spoilers at the end, simply because I've watched too much and it's no longer fresh. I think the self-created soul skills, practicing and farming are all okay, but the development and advancement of the plot are a bit stiff, because I really feel that the protagonist only integrates one of his friends since childhood, and the others are completely treated based on the stereotypes of the original plot, so spoilers are one of the reasons for this sense of isolation. To summarize, the author's writing power is limited, and secondly, fan writing is inherently difficult, and people criticize him no matter how he writes. Although I quite like the author's early work on farming, I don't really like the subject matter. I'm waiting for the author's next book.

Does the author have a book club?

Fortunately, I didn't read the comments section first! I picked this book up from someone else's book list. I thought it was interesting after reading the introduction, so I read it directly. If I had read the comments first, I might have been dissuaded. Back to the topic, at first glance, I saw some of the poisonous points mentioned in the comment section of this novel. I was a little bit annoyed when I read it, but I got better after reading it for a long time. If you accept the author's setting, this kind of spoiler is pretty cool, and the author is a little bit right. As for giving away girls, I don't think I am giving away girls. After all, I support the original CP. Except for Dai Mubai, who is a bit scumbag, others are relatively acceptable. Then the author arranged for Dai Mubai to change before he became a scumbag, which was very good. As for Fatty Ma having a harem, I don't care about that. I just feel sorry for Bai Chenxiang, but Bai Chenxiang is really not worthy of Fatty. After all, his talent is too poor to become a god. This book gave me a lot of surprises. The biggest surprise is that the protagonist breaks out of the limitations of soul rings and soul skills. The setting description of the essence of soul power and domain as well as various self-created soul skills are really reasonable and vivid, as if the setting of Douluo is like this. This is a great praise! Then there is the protagonist. The protagonist is a player who wants to get through a happy ending. I like this very much, because I also hope to have a Douluo happy ending fanfic. In addition, the protagonist is tortured crazy by the lack of entertainment from Douluo. I think it will be very real, and a dead nerd cannot accept the days without the Internet! In short, this book gave me too many surprises, and it is probably my favorite Douluo fanfic I have ever read.

Regarding spoilers: If the charlatans in the chat group don't all pretend to be the same, why are they talking about the plot over the internet and saying that it's okay in the future but not face to face? At least the spoilers in this book didn't make me feel intellectually challenged. Imagine someone went to Xiang Yu at the end of the Qin Dynasty with the Historical Records of Xiang Yu to pretend to be a fortune teller, and then they sent you a string of seal scripts and asked you who the emperor of Chu was, how to arrange the military and civilian generals, and then gave you a string of people you had never heard of. Are you telling him that you can be counted as the son of destiny, but the lifeline of the country cannot be counted as the fortune of an ordinary person? How much can a novel say? Many people only have a few words of common knowledge. This world has martial spirits, many legends of gods, and combat power comes first. In particular, Bibi Dong, the successor to the gods, has a higher level of acceptance of things that others cannot understand. The master should also understand, otherwise the original book would not let them go to sea to find an island. It's not something dangerous anyway, and there's no price to pay, so why don't you believe it? About giving away a girl: There is not only one kind of emotion between men and women, and there is no need to have ulterior motives for being nice to others. There is no ambiguity between the protagonist and Ning Rongrong, and their level of concern is not as great as that of Oscar. It is just the same training. The eldest lady is too tossing, and the author wrote out this tossing thing. The protagonist also made it clear that he would not like other men. About Licking: As an ordinary person, as an adult, if you are reborn as fourteen or fifteen years old, do you really want to be jealous of a bunch of brats? In addition, the starting point is three years, Europe, now it is five years starting point, the maximum penalty is death. Of course, there was something wrong with Xiao Wu when I first met him. I thought it was love at first sight when I read it for the first time. About soul skills: The most disdainful thing about the original work is that after tens of thousands of years, the Tang Sect still has only a few self-created soul skills. If you spread the word, will you be missing something? If you teach someone, they will definitely learn it and make a breakthrough? They don't have the ability to communicate rewards now, and they won't in the future? After all, a person's ability is limited. If you want to live a modern and rich life, you can't just get one or two titles. The so-called spoilers are basically the basics of unlimited flow, using information advantages - characters, major events, memory-killing content - to earn profits. Joining Shrek counts, otherwise there would be too many schools to choose from. The other plots are not to the extent of reducing intelligence, and it would not be unreasonable in a world with imaginary settings. In this world, the real right to speak is strength, and the protagonist's use of soul power and self-created soul skills are the real capital. Except for the conversation with Bibi Dong, there is no real life-threatening situation.

Is this the end? It's so uncomfortable. I went back to write my own book. I started to have the courage to write a book because I read your book. You are reflected in many things. You are my inspiration. When will the next book come? I fully support it. You are the first Douluo fanfic that I have been able to read in its entirety. Many Douluo fanfics are difficult to read. Only your theories on soul power research, soul ring research, etc. Made my eyes light up: It turns out that fanfics can be written like this! Come on, author, the next book is waiting for you!

Let me briefly talk about my feelings To borrow from a certain review, this book is a dream come true. The current plot is very good. It does not have the hostility of other fans. Instead, it tries its best to reconcile the relationship between the original protagonist group and Wuhun Palace. It is not satisfactory for many things that happened in the past (such as Dai Mubai and Zhu Zhuqing, the master and Erlong/Bibi Dong, Xiao Wu was not discovered, and Oscar became a regular in advance. Etc.) Are given as perfect and satisfactory a treatment and ending as possible under the premise of reasonable spoilers. It also has its own reasonable explanation for soul power and soul skills (don't force it to be a second setting or unreasonable, the original book didn't say anything. Let's look at the setting in the current book, don't bother). Except for the fact that two updates a day are not enough to read, there are no shortcomings for the time being. Come on, author! Update quickly!

I have read Chapter 89 so far. You keep giving away girls. You were a bit ambiguous with Xiao Wu and Ning Rongrong earlier, but you gave them all away in the blink of an eye. It is so speechless. There is even a hint of homosexuality in the article. Is the author a girl👧? Wow, I really can't stand it anymore. While watching, I felt a sense of depression, which was weird and I couldn't explain why. It should be that he is too selfless, too saintly, as if he just added a golden-fingered grandpa to the Douluo protagonist group. I don't like this routine very much, no, I should say I don't like it very much. You can consider this to be a cool article. The protagonist is invincible at the same level. It is trivial to defeat monsters by leapfrogging levels. He is the invisible leader of the protagonist group, but how do you say it? It's still too powerful to send a girl away, this is too poisonous. Is the author a descendant of the Tang clan? Or is your main source of readers coming from the Tang clan? Of course, the author's writing style is absolutely conscientious. I can see these nearly a hundred chapters because of your writing style. There are really not many Douluo fan authors with good writing style these days. The protagonist is a commoner, with level two innate qualifications and a ten-year soul ring. It can be regarded as arousing the interest of readers and finding a new way (I have also thought about this counter-routine, because the martial arts and soul ring age of the Douluo fan protagonists I have seen before are basically very good, but the writing is not good and I can't write it). Alas, the content is too much to make people speechless. If Douluo fans don't dismantle the original CP, especially the "three or five don't dismantle it" (the other two pairs are relatively dismantling), then what are you watching? Just the protagonist showing off? Nothing to see.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            been been been been

Just a dog of Tang San

The novel feels very comfortable, unlike other novels that have an invincible start.

I feel that the emotional problems of the protagonist may be the sequelae caused by amnesia. Since the title of the book is White Ring Douluo and the setting is particularly good, it seems that there are already good books by Shang Jia in the Douluo fandom. I love it in the book shortage. There is no brainless romance or brainless black characters. It's really good. Except for the chaos that predicts the future, everything else is just right.

It was so poisonous that I almost didn't eat my dinner. The writing is okay, but the author likes to enjoy himself. When he meets someone, he wants to tell all his little secrets complacently. He claims that everyone is honest with each other, which can easily enhance the relationship, including saying that Tang San has traveled through time, he has also traveled through time, Xiao Wu is a spirit beast, Xiao Wu's mother is dead, etc. If you don't care about this, you can take a look

It can only be said that the author is addicted to his own world. If it were not for the fact that the protagonist is finally not the common starting point of full soul power nb martial arts and dual martial arts, I feel that the beginning of this book is not attractive. The following is because the protagonist's talent generally relies on his own black technology to attract me to read. Then the poisonous point begins, (the following is the poisonous point in my personal opinion) Dai Mubai arrives, chasing after the original work to get Dai Boss, okay, you can call it whatever you want The second poisonous point is crazy spoilers. Those spoilers about the Oscars in the past are nothing and they have come full circle. Later, in the Shrek admissions spoilers, there are a few men, 1 girl and 3 people, and you told Dai Mubai that Zhu Zhuqing is coming. Don't you think it's weird? You are not Harry Potter and you have **** prophecy. Why are you doing a spoiler (=_=), just to lick Oscar Dai Mubai? In order to help them perform better in front of CP? Then in the third poisonous hotel, the protagonist praises Xiao Wu for her beauty, and then Xiao Wu shyly refuses and Tang San is jealous. Why are you writing this without breaking the cp (=_=). Later, the protagonist keeps saying that I would chase you if you and Tang San had feelings. Don't you think this is redundant Then the fourth Tang San acted like a fool and had no city at all. In the last level of Shrek's admissions, he used a blue silver grass to tie up the protagonist for the first time, but he stopped explaining how the blue silver grass was so there was no way you could break free. Then the second time he used parasitism, it started again, like an nt. . . It turns out that Tang San, who was able to tolerate secretly learning martial arts in Tangmen, and the master said that his twin martial arts had murderous intentions, is so shabi Fifth, tell Tang San about Tangmen martial arts and let Tang San know that there is something wrong with the protagonist. Is it necessary? Some people say that in order to make Tang Sanshen, it's not so much if he loses the enrollment, and it is also written that the protagonist did not use his full strength, so what is this for? Do you want to be a prophet like Shabi in order to write something later? Tell Xiao Wu how you want to solve the problem of the hundred thousand year soul beast, and then you also say that I can predict the future without me, so that's all you do? Others don't even have a hint of suspicion? In particular, Tang San didn't behave like a child who had perfectly adapted to his own age. . . . . Okay, I can only say that the more the author writes, the better. Just don't let down the readers who support you. Anyway, I am personally defeated.

This is a nanny article, and why do you need to tell Tang San that you are a time traveler? With the Tang Sect's behavior and Tang San's viciousness, aren't you afraid of being tricked to death by him?

The author doesn't think there's anything wrong with spoiling the story in front of others, but whether you imagine it or read the feedback from readers afterwards, you should know that some readers won't be able to accept it. Then why do you insist on writing this kind of plot to make it difficult for readers and your own books, and constantly screen out readers?

I read spin-off fanfics just for fun, but I really can't stand it after reading this one. Although I could be the boss in the past, I had to let Dai Mubai be the boss, and he still called me Boss Dai so naturally. You entered Shrek earlier than Dai Mubai, and you are better than Dai Mubai, but you just want to lick it. You have to know that when you write this novel, the protagonist is yourself, not Tang San or anyone else. I hope you will be the best.

The main character licks Shrek too much. Hug the thigh in the early stage? The protagonist hasn't become stronger in the early stage. Whose thigh are you holding on to? In the later stage, he was hunted down by the Spirit Hall, and when he became a god in the later stage, he didn't even take his teacher with him. The fat man knelt down and begged Tang San, but it was useless. Therefore, Fatty and Tang San broke up.

The protagonist is sending a girl to his hand until his hand cramps. He had an affair with Ning Rongrong and Xiao Wu in the front, but then he sends the girl away with his backhand. When Tang San absorbed the soul ring, he tried to block it with his life. I wonder if you think of Tang San as your father or your mother, or that the protagonist is gay because he likes to have sex? Including the following Oscar, the protagonist doesn't care about other women at all. Regarding Oscar, I can only say that he is meticulous and caring, and the protagonist knows the plot and tells Tang San. I don't believe you even if you say that the protagonist is not gay. I can only call the protagonist the nanny, Yue Lao, and the first person to be gay. And the protagonist has to replenish his life due to changes in the plot and so on. It doesn't feel any different from the original plot (just because Dai Mubai is the boss in the original, he gave up the boss's position, and Dai Mubai can't beat the protagonist). If it is exactly the same as the original, then I will have to watch the original. Don't tell me what the plot behind it is, I can't watch the front at all. The protagonist has also revealed his identity as a time traveler, so isn't he afraid that walls have ears and others will hear him? In other words, if Tang San didn't show loyalty and betrayed him, then he would be dissected in minutes. And with your profile, it's just like selling dog meat on a sheep's head.

The emotional line is a complete mess, the emotions between Dai Zhu and Ao Ning have no origin. The protagonist has a bizarre personality. He gives care, a daughter, and self-created soul skills (without any reservations, silly me, have I ever shared Tang San's skills with you)? He has the heart of a holy mother, and can even be considered a licker. I still don't understand why Shrek was so highly praised in the early stage. He doesn't need soul rings, doesn't need resources, and can't establish a strong relationship. It's all just for licking, giving out benefits and giving away spoilers. Just... Outrageous.

It's getting weirder and weirder. Does it make sense to keep revealing the future to others? Or maybe the future you revealed will only make the future develop in an unstable direction. Didn't you notice? Tang San's external soul bone was almost gone because of your revelation. In fact, it's gone if it's gone. The key is that you still want to bring him back, which gives people a strange feeling of forcefully pulling it. Maybe you want to bring in a sense of identity between the two characters, but to be honest, that's not how the relationship works.

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